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[106.71.19.159]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id 98e67ed59e1d1-3ae40427782sm48676a91.4.2026.10.26.08.52.14 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Mon, 26 Oct 2026 08:52:23 -0700 (PDT) From: Aveline Noir To: SJ Park Cc: Manuel Ebner , Jonathan Corbet , Shuah Khan , Randy Dunlap , damon@lists.linux.dev, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/start: fix grammar In-Reply-To: <20261026142927.149910-1-sj@kernel.org> References: <20261026142927.149910-1-sj@kernel.org> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: List-Owner: Precedence: list MIME-Version: 1.0 Date: Tue, 27 Oct 2026 02:50:54 +1100 Message-ID: <179302985413.2.2084375678408090049.damon-docs-reply-01-start@gmail.com> Hi SJ and Manuel, On Mon, 26 Oct 2026 07:29:26 -0700, SJ Park wrote: > My intention was saying DAMO is commanding DAMON to monitor the process. > So I find Aveline's version is slightly better. Agreed. Both "start" and "make" depend on "asks DAMO to", so I'd keep "make" here. > Looks good. Unless Aveline objects or do this by themselves with > revisioning, I will add this change when I apply this patch to > damon/next. Those two fixes look good to me too. Please include them when applying, SJ. Thank you both for reviewing. Thanks, Aveline Noir