From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from mout.gmx.net (mout.gmx.net [212.227.15.15]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 20F841AB52D; Thu, 3 Oct 2024 23:03:37 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.client-ip=212.227.15.15 ARC-Seal:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1727996621; cv=none; b=TnEsp21aDJzxkDe3mSWkwc2YI33vvzTI/NyL3+ROXHGX1UjSRsavBzeSNihozq0W2HwaJHvxPudeCTq67d+NouZCZqQtsAaD6YtzsySOBlGMXe1XHllGkxCJAwd0Vjfz69wyFKVTvISjtTN4fOqgSt9IJaN63U3THurR8kZrSgk= ARC-Message-Signature:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1727996621; c=relaxed/simple; bh=RlBHWrkvPIdEMvHPzkeCP7Y0MeQke+gep+nbMAKkxPI=; h=Message-ID:Date:MIME-Version:Subject:To:Cc:References:From: In-Reply-To:Content-Type; b=UwkMsvX6GNg6noI5tSF/71tMTEHmDdrgGzdTbOcxBEoQZkvKD+x2ZxKucAY+o7Q7BzUYlT8jcsCuhvmHcPRGihZtgdtBZhofklykv4m1Z1RCxKAIIuZEWGd5Vhih221zj8Sa7YaPX9qAxEim9O/ub1Mu+zGSk39jv1Hg8nC5PnM= ARC-Authentication-Results:i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=quarantine dis=none) header.from=gmx.de; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=gmx.de; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=gmx.de header.i=w_armin@gmx.de header.b=qk2H5B/t; arc=none smtp.client-ip=212.227.15.15 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=quarantine dis=none) header.from=gmx.de Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=gmx.de Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=gmx.de header.i=w_armin@gmx.de header.b="qk2H5B/t" DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmx.de; s=s31663417; t=1727996610; x=1728601410; i=w_armin@gmx.de; bh=nGQ2e3eWhWCnCEzigv0/+ogytIWxpyFa6ZW3FmJvq8E=; h=X-UI-Sender-Class:Message-ID:Date:MIME-Version:Subject:To:Cc: References:From:In-Reply-To:Content-Type: Content-Transfer-Encoding:cc:content-transfer-encoding: content-type:date:from:message-id:mime-version:reply-to:subject: to; b=qk2H5B/toLiXozMBVngIUDE44Jjo1bAVMGCk20qtWPIwqxkjOn0BhUAOikIgjrjF wlAyfhwiLLDIL4jRtnHhOvkuBoY5VtYjbuckO9TJKvHNVfMigwXb/M6tkd28Q634W GNW/Uve5KQDBX/fSmXOSayDcWpQuasfdipB38dFvnbjE2+y1IHlasHwQyY8GEGX7i 1Oo8oRyt9VAujVqDSfLhRF3+l+UyaCPbZI5TC78jkKFmw8d1QjqeW+6oQJkjoW+/I UHUv/OGDFJVM/EIHjj7rvrbTlhkOMB9E4edFLLcWu8ZgYVQriNFsDO4nncsf7WRyo FrgWdfcC01cgcwJZ0w== X-UI-Sender-Class: 724b4f7f-cbec-4199-ad4e-598c01a50d3a Received: from [192.168.2.35] ([91.137.126.34]) by mail.gmx.net (mrgmx005 [212.227.17.190]) with ESMTPSA (Nemesis) id 1N0oBr-1s09Zv3HVd-00sqpX; Fri, 04 Oct 2024 01:03:30 +0200 Message-ID: <17bc2698-9113-4cf0-b58b-4f9db1813753@gmx.de> Date: Fri, 4 Oct 2024 01:03:29 +0200 Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla Thunderbird Subject: Re: [PATCH] fix typo in Documentation/wmi/devices/dell-wmi-ddv.rst To: Anaswara T Rajan Cc: corbet@lwn.net, platform-driver-x86@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org References: <20241002100748.309707-1-anaswaratrajan@gmail.com> Content-Language: en-US From: Armin Wolf In-Reply-To: <20241002100748.309707-1-anaswaratrajan@gmail.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Provags-ID: V03:K1:8NV1QISHBdcUWuIi9vy5D0xmjN0fZXEGGGvD9lT4oMCLKmD6H6C RlA1ThF7r9oDSPqb4Up+5q1OSOrLkaYvXYipFJaGCQTiAApr4N/4hYhsvSTayPvSljEpKYL 6tAv/PjeB18ecZFLhQ8KmqiPQrZANcrd3egkAfPSGUh6XoTnckcA9K+sPMFTHnd/0LBhldX VChwiXks7GENusqzkE95Q== X-Spam-Flag: NO UI-OutboundReport: notjunk:1;M01:P0:pLYzM+Qns9c=;T7hfbrlG61qcrBwYBn7Mxl6OLkS Er3QJJH13MQ/F/EQRatzDimkJa4r15fsjo9pzT+vs2XrCwFtrt++0T12nhSTAMD+vT2YMlmMk Nx6T9Z6GIZO+iLG3nT5zIzIAEzUtf7rrGaz3or+7tJWg2lsOWTgGzN6r4uHLqUUBM0/ob5fY9 lD/FAbZQlLLNkr/zaAcZeXuMeafRGa/CD1BxpzotUceicO3B6Ckypv2e8io3SKZLuSAFhBI02 0kB61C1rjLuiDLcqDj/CuKzC3lEXbX9/5czBrpDECiUeQShyXK6m3nHHJz8LNeZzoUo+rLhnz GmF35LBrkOg6l5qYEZVICkvXUv0GDdYWmG8oNNsoqC6BVWmrTZFKd6vglEn5ifeW0iLhcJvEH NwUQIWdnm0VLXD/EsPAUCNMBa8XmLAZQOzZVaQpcY8Hs2kjFsOkMSfHQIiENLIRVd4u6AEoGa LlIS2LJYmTe7Vss4VAvzR9x8quSU90q+jFmlR/XibUPqjxxPbTHsqJqUV3oRQv3W/NJ2xUQ7Q ucPv/cXHbnWZTvyWf8FxLcXKr774t8KE+h178WTuy/30c6RVwcxMv3NBA8ZFqptHHbgPYkcbB DoHMTRW2JLSFjQIODsyM+MFYOMgFu8LiimMiE1pTQwWJ76P45XB77qgqKfxIsy0tBWiYhpbHG PyKaxcExHbuz6WtLQw84O+AbjKJZ2ZmsPEtkVVpGYbHdHbMoHB0oHGDD+UIDLXELTBva7TdQ0 I+Wk4UaynF1NFsT98e6AcLJuWh3bV4VnMo1TRd1dTUeudzck3JOuAMwb/6G/8d5Vb4pMtWDR9 YC9v2Mf5HapqDYg+nYZodYFUDa9xdcnPla9bL6pHvoiMY= Am 02.10.24 um 12:07 schrieb Anaswara T Rajan: > typo in word 'diagnostics' Please rename your patch to "platform/x86: dell-ddv: Fix typo in documenta= tion" and rework the patch description so it forms a full sentence. Other than that, the patch look fine. Thanks, Armin Wolf > Signed-off-by: Anaswara T Rajan > --- > Documentation/wmi/devices/dell-wmi-ddv.rst | 4 ++-- > 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/Documentation/wmi/devices/dell-wmi-ddv.rst b/Documentation/= wmi/devices/dell-wmi-ddv.rst > index 2fcdfcf03327..e0c20af30948 100644 > --- a/Documentation/wmi/devices/dell-wmi-ddv.rst > +++ b/Documentation/wmi/devices/dell-wmi-ddv.rst > @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Introduction > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D > > Many Dell notebooks made after ~2020 support a WMI-based interface for > -retrieving various system data like battery temperature, ePPID, diagost= ic data > +retrieving various system data like battery temperature, ePPID, diagnos= tic data > and fan/thermal sensor data. > > This interface is likely used by the `Dell Data Vault` software on Win= dows, > @@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ Reverse-Engineering the DDV WMI interface > 4. Try to deduce the meaning of a certain WMI method by comparing the = control > flow with other ACPI methods (_BIX or _BIF for battery related meth= ods > for example). > -5. Use the built-in UEFI diagostics to view sensor types/values for fan= /thermal > +5. Use the built-in UEFI diagnostics to view sensor types/values for fa= n/thermal > related methods (sometimes overwriting static ACPI data fields can = be used > to test different sensor type values, since on some machines this d= ata is > not reinitialized upon a warm reset).