From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S262339AbVGFX3e (ORCPT ); Wed, 6 Jul 2005 19:29:34 -0400 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org id S262576AbVGFX1p (ORCPT ); Wed, 6 Jul 2005 19:27:45 -0400 Received: from chretien.genwebhost.com ([209.59.175.22]:31136 "EHLO chretien.genwebhost.com") by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S262563AbVGFX1H (ORCPT ); Wed, 6 Jul 2005 19:27:07 -0400 Date: Wed, 6 Jul 2005 16:27:01 -0700 From: randy_dunlap To: dwalker@mvista.com Cc: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, torvalds@osdl.org, mingo@elte.hu, greg@kroah.com, alan@lxorguk.ukuu.org.uk Subject: Re: [PATCH] Documentation fixes Message-Id: <20050706162701.20614562.rdunlap@xenotime.net> In-Reply-To: <1120691531.16159.42.camel@dhcp153.mvista.com> References: <1120691531.16159.42.camel@dhcp153.mvista.com> Organization: YPO4 X-Mailer: Sylpheed version 1.0.5 (GTK+ 1.2.10; i686-pc-linux-gnu) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-ClamAntiVirus-Scanner: This mail is clean X-AntiAbuse: This header was added to track abuse, please include it with any abuse report X-AntiAbuse: Primary Hostname - chretien.genwebhost.com X-AntiAbuse: Original Domain - vger.kernel.org X-AntiAbuse: Originator/Caller UID/GID - [47 12] / [47 12] X-AntiAbuse: Sender Address Domain - xenotime.net X-Source: X-Source-Args: X-Source-Dir: Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org On Wed, 06 Jul 2005 16:12:11 -0700 Daniel Walker wrote: | | I noticed some typo's or mis-thoughts .. Here are my corrections. I | tried to CC all the authors. Yes, mostly good corrections. Here are more on top of yours. Thanks, ~Randy | Index: linux-2.6.12/Documentation/watchdog/watchdog.txt | =================================================================== | --- linux-2.6.12.orig/Documentation/watchdog/watchdog.txt 2005-06-17 19:48:29.000000000 +0000 | +++ linux-2.6.12/Documentation/watchdog/watchdog.txt 2005-07-03 18:12:40.000000000 +0000 | @@ -18,12 +18,12 @@ The following watchdog drivers are curre | All six interfaces provide /dev/watchdog, which when open must be written | to within a timeout or the machine will reboot. Each write delays the reboot | time another timeout. In the case of the software watchdog the ability to | -reboot will depend on the state of the machines and interrupts. The hardware | +reboot will depend on the state of the machine and interrupts. The hardware | boards physically pull the machine down off their own onboard timers and | will reboot from almost anything. | | A second temperature monitoring interface is available on the WDT501P cards | -and some Berkshire cards. This provides /dev/temperature. This is the machine | +and some Berkshire cards. This provides /dev/temperature. This is the machines machine's (and kill the trailing space) | internal temperature in degrees Fahrenheit. Each read returns a single byte | giving the temperature. | | @@ -37,16 +37,16 @@ The wdt card cannot be safely probed for | wdt=ioaddr,irq as a boot parameter - eg "wdt=0x240,11". | | The SA1100 watchdog module can be configured with the "sa1100_margin" | -commandline argument which specifies timeout value in seconds. | +commandline argument which specifies the timeout value in seconds. | | The i810 TCO watchdog modules can be configured with the "i810_margin" | -commandline argument which specifies the counter initial value. The counter | -is decremented every 0.6 seconds and default to 50 (30 seconds). Values can | +commandline argument which specifies the counters initial value. The counter counter's | +is decremented every 0.6 seconds and defaults to 50 (30 seconds). Values can | range between 3 and 63. | | The i810 TCO watchdog driver also implements the WDIOC_GETSTATUS and | WDIOC_GETBOOTSTATUS ioctl()s. WDIOC_GETSTATUS returns the actual counter value | -and WDIOC_GETBOOTSTATUS returns the value of TCO2 Status Register (see Intel's | +and WDIOC_GETBOOTSTATUS returns the value of the TCO2 Status Register (see Intel's Please wrap lines at < 80 characters per line. | documentation for the 82801AA and 82801AB datasheet).