From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1751459AbVJRHrN (ORCPT ); Tue, 18 Oct 2005 03:47:13 -0400 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org id S1751461AbVJRHrN (ORCPT ); Tue, 18 Oct 2005 03:47:13 -0400 Received: from ip-svs-1.Informatik.Uni-Oldenburg.DE ([134.106.12.126]:56756 "EHLO aechz.svs.informatik.uni-oldenburg.de") by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1751459AbVJRHrN (ORCPT ); Tue, 18 Oct 2005 03:47:13 -0400 Date: Tue, 18 Oct 2005 09:46:01 +0200 From: Philipp Matthias Hahn To: Rob Landley Cc: Kernel Mailing List Subject: Re: [PATCH] Documentation for ramfs, rootfs, initramfs. Message-ID: <20051018074601.GA2404@titan.lahn.de> Mail-Followup-To: Rob Landley , Kernel Mailing List References: <200510172242.08809.rob@landley.net> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <200510172242.08809.rob@landley.net> Organization: UUCP-Freunde Lahn e.V. User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.11 Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Hello! Non a native speaker myself, but if I remember correctly, I found the following issues in your nice documentation, which you might want to fix: On Mon, Oct 17, 2005 at 10:42:08PM -0500, Rob Landley wrote: > --- old/Documentation/filesystems/ramfs-rootfs-initramfs.txt 2005-10-17 22:39:30.194448784 -0500 > +What is ramfs? > +-------------- s/cacheing/caching/ s/soon soon/soon/ s/was of a fixed size/was of fixed size/ s/was a fixed size/was of fixed size/ > +What is initramfs? > +------------------ s/bringing the system the rest of the way up/bringing the system up the rest of the way/ s/after the embedded cpio archive is extracted into it// s/a root partition, then exec/a root partition and execute/ > +All this differs from the old initrd in several ways: s/but by default it's an empty archive./but by default is an empty archive./ s/When switching another root device/When switching to another root device/ BYtE Philipp -- / / (_)__ __ ____ __ Philipp Hahn / /__/ / _ \/ // /\ \/ / /____/_/_//_/\_,_/ /_/\_\ pmhahn@titan.lahn.de