From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1751809AbWF2MCd (ORCPT ); Thu, 29 Jun 2006 08:02:33 -0400 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org id S1751871AbWF2MCd (ORCPT ); Thu, 29 Jun 2006 08:02:33 -0400 Received: from mail.gmx.net ([213.165.64.21]:4995 "HELO mail.gmx.net") by vger.kernel.org with SMTP id S1751809AbWF2MCc (ORCPT ); Thu, 29 Jun 2006 08:02:32 -0400 X-Authenticated: #342784 From: jensmh@gmx.de To: Paolo Ornati Subject: Re: [PATCH] Documentation: remove duplicate cleanups Date: Thu, 29 Jun 2006 14:02:18 +0200 User-Agent: KMail/1.9.3 Cc: Linux Kernel Mailing List , trivial@kernel.org, Paolo Ornati References: <20060629134002.1b06257c@localhost> In-Reply-To: <20060629134002.1b06257c@localhost> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline Message-Id: <200606291402.21287.jensmh@gmx.de> X-Y-GMX-Trusted: 0 Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Paolo Ornati writes: > diff --git a/Documentation/block/as-iosched.txt b/Documentation/block/as-iosched.txt > index 6f47332..ed24cdd 100644 > --- a/Documentation/block/as-iosched.txt > +++ b/Documentation/block/as-iosched.txt > @@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ or if the next request in the queue is " > just completed request, it is dispatched immediately. Otherwise, > statistics (average think time, average seek distance) on the process > that submitted the just completed request are examined. If it seems > -likely that that process will submit another request soon, and that old version is correct, I think. > +likely that process will submit another request soon, and that > request is likely to be near the just completed request, then the IO > scheduler will stop dispatching more read requests for up time (antic_expire) > milliseconds, hoping that process will submit a new request near the one > diff --git a/Documentation/exception.txt b/Documentation/exception.txt > index 3cb39ad..75aaa6e 100644 > --- a/Documentation/exception.txt > +++ b/Documentation/exception.txt > @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ int verify_area(int type, const void * a > function (which has since been replaced by access_ok()). > > This function verified that the memory area starting at address > -addr and of size size was accessible for the operation specified maybe old version is correct. > +addr and of size was accessible for the operation specified > in type (read or write). To do this, verify_read had to look up the > virtual memory area (vma) that contained the address addr. In the > normal case (correctly working program), this test was successful. > diff --git a/Documentation/fb/fbcon.txt b/Documentation/fb/fbcon.txt > index f373df1..4a9739a 100644 > --- a/Documentation/fb/fbcon.txt > +++ b/Documentation/fb/fbcon.txt > @@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ C. Boot options > > C. Attaching, Detaching and Unloading > > -Before going on on how to attach, detach and unload the framebuffer console, an not sure here, I'm not a native english speaker. > +Before going on how to attach, detach and unload the framebuffer console, an > illustration of the dependencies may help. >