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From: SeongJae Park <sj38.park@gmail.com>
To: peterz@infradead.org, mingo@redhat.com, acme@kernel.org,
	alexander.shishkin@linux.intel.com
Cc: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, SeongJae Park <sj38.park@gmail.com>
Subject: [PATCH 3/5] perf-script-python.txt: Polish command examples
Date: Tue, 30 May 2017 20:18:25 +0900	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20170530111827.21732-4-sj38.park@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20170530111827.21732-1-sj38.park@gmail.com>

Few shell command examples in perf-script-python.txt has few nitpicks
include:

- tools/perf/scripts/python directory listing command is unnecessarily
  repeated.
- few examples contain additional information in command prompt
  unnecessarily and inconsistently.

This commit fixes them to enhance readability of the document.

Signed-off-by: SeongJae Park <sj38.park@gmail.com>
Fixes: cff68e582237 ("perf/scripts: Add perf-trace-python Documentation")
---
 tools/perf/Documentation/perf-script-python.txt | 6 ++----
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/tools/perf/Documentation/perf-script-python.txt b/tools/perf/Documentation/perf-script-python.txt
index 087b87c956ba..44e51351536f 100644
--- a/tools/perf/Documentation/perf-script-python.txt
+++ b/tools/perf/Documentation/perf-script-python.txt
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ right place, you can have your script listed alongside the other
 scripts listed by the 'perf script -l' command e.g.:
 
 ----
-root@tropicana:~# perf script -l
+# perf script -l
 List of available trace scripts:
   wakeup-latency                       system-wide min/max/avg wakeup latency
   rw-by-file <comm>                    r/w activity for a program, by file
@@ -383,8 +383,6 @@ source tree:
 
 ----
 # ls -al kernel-source/tools/perf/scripts/python
-
-root@tropicana:/home/trz/src/tip# ls -al tools/perf/scripts/python
 total 32
 drwxr-xr-x 4 trz trz 4096 2010-01-26 22:30 .
 drwxr-xr-x 4 trz trz 4096 2010-01-26 22:29 ..
@@ -399,7 +397,7 @@ otherwise your script won't show up at run-time), 'perf script -l'
 should show a new entry for your script:
 
 ----
-root@tropicana:~# perf script -l
+# perf script -l
 List of available trace scripts:
   wakeup-latency                       system-wide min/max/avg wakeup latency
   rw-by-file <comm>                    r/w activity for a program, by file
-- 
2.13.0

  parent reply	other threads:[~2017-05-30 11:18 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 17+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2017-05-30 11:18 [PATCH 0/5] perf: Fix few nitpicks in perf-script SeongJae Park
2017-05-30 11:18 ` [PATCH 1/5] perf script: Fix outdated comment for perf-trace-python SeongJae Park
2017-06-07 23:19   ` Arnaldo Carvalho de Melo
2017-06-08 22:46   ` [tip:perf/urgent] " tip-bot for SeongJae Park
2017-05-30 11:18 ` [PATCH 2/5] perf-script-python,perl.txt: Fix typos SeongJae Park
2017-06-07 23:19   ` Arnaldo Carvalho de Melo
2017-06-08 22:47   ` [tip:perf/urgent] perf script: Fix documentation errors tip-bot for SeongJae Park
2017-05-30 11:18 ` SeongJae Park [this message]
2017-06-08 22:49   ` [tip:perf/urgent] perf script python: Remove dups in documentation examples tip-bot for SeongJae Park
2017-05-30 11:18 ` [PATCH 4/5] perf-script-python.txt: Fix wrong code snippets SeongJae Park
2017-06-07 23:35   ` Arnaldo Carvalho de Melo
2017-06-07 23:47     ` SeongJae Park
2017-06-08 22:47   ` [tip:perf/urgent] perf script python: Fix wrong code snippets in documentation tip-bot for SeongJae Park
2017-05-30 11:18 ` [PATCH 5/5] perf-script-python.txt: Apply updated trace_unhandled() definition SeongJae Park
2017-06-07 23:27   ` Arnaldo Carvalho de Melo
2017-06-08 22:48   ` [tip:perf/urgent] perf script python: Updated trace_unhandled() signature tip-bot for SeongJae Park
2017-06-07 22:42 ` [PATCH 0/5] perf: Fix few nitpicks in perf-script SeongJae Park

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