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From: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
To: virtualization@lists.linux-foundation.org,
	linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Cc: "Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com>,
	"Jason Wang" <jasowang@redhat.com>,
	"Jonathan Corbet" <corbet@lwn.net>,
	"Ricardo Cañuelo" <ricardo.canuelo@collabora.com>,
	"Cornelia Huck" <cohuck@redhat.com>,
	kernel@collabora.com, "Bagas Sanjaya" <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] docs: driver-api: virtio: slightly reword virtqueues allocation paragraph
Date: Tue, 20 Dec 2022 16:58:28 +0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20221220095828.27588-3-bagasdotme@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20221220095828.27588-1-bagasdotme@gmail.com>

"It's at this stage that" means "At this point", so use the latter as it
is more effective.

Signed-off-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/driver-api/virtio/virtio.rst | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/driver-api/virtio/virtio.rst b/Documentation/driver-api/virtio/virtio.rst
index 2e4ac9557f4a9f..88e2a9bcd8b3f7 100644
--- a/Documentation/driver-api/virtio/virtio.rst
+++ b/Documentation/driver-api/virtio/virtio.rst
@@ -123,10 +123,10 @@ When the device is registered to the virtio bus the kernel will look
 for a driver in the bus that can handle the device and call that
 driver's ``probe`` method.
 
-It's at this stage that the virtqueues will be allocated and configured
-by calling the appropriate ``virtio_find`` helper function, such as
-virtio_find_single_vq() or virtio_find_vqs(), which will end up
-calling a transport-specific ``find_vqs`` method.
+At this point, the virtqueues will be allocated and configured by
+calling the appropriate ``virtio_find`` helper function, such as
+virtio_find_single_vq() or virtio_find_vqs(), which will end up calling
+a transport-specific ``find_vqs`` method.
 
 
 References
-- 
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  parent reply	other threads:[~2022-12-20 10:01 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-12-20  9:58 [PATCH 0/3] docs: driver-api: virtio: documentation improv suggestion Bagas Sanjaya
2022-12-20  9:58 ` [PATCH 1/3] docs: driver-api: virtio: parenthesize external reference targets Bagas Sanjaya
2022-12-20  9:58 ` Bagas Sanjaya [this message]
2022-12-20  9:58 ` [PATCH 3/3] docs: driver-api: virtio: commentize spec version checking Bagas Sanjaya
2022-12-20 11:11 ` [PATCH 0/3] docs: driver-api: virtio: documentation improv suggestion Michael S. Tsirkin

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