From: Sebastian Andrzej Siewior <bigeasy@linutronix.de>
To: Quchaosheng <quchaosheng000406@163.com>
Cc: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>, Ingo Molnar <mingo@redhat.com>,
Peter Zijlstra <peterz@infradead.org>,
Shuah Khan <skhan@linuxfoundation.org>,
Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>,
linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 2/2] docs: kernel-parameters: fix a truncated sentence for preempt=lazy
Date: Mon, 21 Sep 2026 13:33:26 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20260921113326.MTXJ89aP@linutronix.de> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20260920022003.1202546-2-quchaosheng000406@163.com>
On 2026-09-20 10:20:03 [+0800], Quchaosheng wrote:
> The "lazy" entry ends with:
>
> One preemption is when the task returns to user space.
>
> which is not a sentence. It is a leftover from shortening "One such
> preemption is when the task returns to user space." Add the missing
> word back.
>
> Fixes: f66e4a996582 ("sched/core: Update kernel boot parameters for LAZY preempt.")
> Signed-off-by: Quchaosheng <quchaosheng000406@163.com>
> ---
> Documentation/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.txt | 4 ++--
> 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.txt b/Documentation/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.txt
> index 33cd30996e47..6c1bfba180a2 100644
> --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.txt
> @@ -5453,8 +5453,8 @@ Kernel parameters
> lazy - Scheduler controlled. Similar to full but instead
> of preempting the task immediately, the task gets
> one HZ tick time to yield itself before the
> - preemption will be forced. One preemption is when the
> - task returns to user space.
> + preemption will be forced. One such preemption is
> + when the task returns to user space.
I think if you do "preemption point" the sentence becomes English again.
>
> print-fatal-signals=
> [KNL] debug: print fatal signals
Sebastian
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2026-09-21 11:33 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 7+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2026-09-20 2:20 [PATCH 1/2] sched/doc: add a preemption model overview Quchaosheng
2026-09-20 2:20 ` [PATCH 2/2] docs: kernel-parameters: fix a truncated sentence for preempt=lazy Quchaosheng
2026-09-21 11:33 ` Sebastian Andrzej Siewior [this message]
2026-09-22 7:06 ` Quchaosheng
2026-09-21 11:30 ` [PATCH 1/2] sched/doc: add a preemption model overview Sebastian Andrzej Siewior
2026-09-22 7:06 ` Quchaosheng
2026-09-22 7:55 ` Sebastian Andrzej Siewior
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