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From: Sebastian Andrzej Siewior <bigeasy@linutronix.de>
To: Quchaosheng <quchaosheng000406@163.com>
Cc: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>,
	Shuah Khan <skhan@linuxfoundation.org>,
	Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>,
	Ingo Molnar <mingo@redhat.com>,
	Peter Zijlstra <peterz@infradead.org>, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org,
	linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 2/2] docs: kernel-parameters: fix a truncated sentence
 for preempt=lazy
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On 2026-09-22 16:31:01 [+0800], Quchaosheng wrote:
> The "lazy" entry ends with:
> 
>   One preemption is when the task returns to user space.
> 
> which is not a sentence.  It is a leftover from shortening "One such
> preemption is when the task returns to user space."
> 
> Writing it as "preemption point" reads better than restoring the missing
> word, so use that.
> 
> Fixes: f66e4a996582 ("sched/core: Update kernel boot parameters for LAZY preempt.")
> Assisted-by: LLM
> Suggested-by: Sebastian Andrzej Siewior <bigeasy@linutronix.de>
> Signed-off-by: Quchaosheng <quchaosheng000406@163.com>

Reviewed-by: Sebastian Andrzej Siewior <bigeasy@linutronix.de>

Sebastian