From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=100.103.45.18 ARC-Seal: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; t=1793025076; b=MOI77TksCspiDcz3hjDNGKzmhAAygXgbME+uXvwv9wqgWMqgPJ1yQl5cP2A4WS7HD4q5 uJuKCbbd800k81JPovkvARRE//l4lP6cpQLZuNtMRs/9w0mwuVTu05rdMaAbaQ08Wf5UO BlLv4HoVQGoNnI2EnA7dcqnNyLRMHEKFfs0sK7ZIyRHW178XTAnBhBCkGj+6HQUpxBYEw uGbedR3zJM3WGA/oczV5ReJMOObFEOLgLvEQhpbk5kM5Aa1sXa8yV4Whcd/OCCPq+bYY1 TTxajrGbrdcUqAO7mrDaY3gCzoP4u5NHR2Tc+mD9nGlC7I7jQN/+WJLYCcofyRmsB2w== ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; t=1793025076; h=Received:DKIM-Signature:From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:Message-ID:X-Mailer: In-Reply-To:References:MIME-Version:Content-Type: Content-Transfer-Encoding; bh=HHYZN7CUNSVC86iKOqMGjhaR96VGj0GsKVxO2ePAdxU=; b=Sj5pltxm3Ge0THHeSI0wHT85FY8BMxjmFnEIqTc4lvxNlBQSMXOEPDxInQqnYkGV6JwM IWY4Szwpl/I86gYH3ciVk+cEPBEUtC0SOeYfPhWw+31EDbX8Z3h7Rd4PenrJFRn2a1Z9a jLJiupZhFQimNJ3fkJoUpRb80Vae6QFNdveAifoIq2wBGBuJOjffmZ/K7tjgAeSrTcNMT R4wXCESQWDOo+TgmGpJ5KpizBS4bT7Io0JKmpv+o+FzUHVXZqoBleiOv+SZQpyH4b8C+c VxiSuqENb8AWo8usukPL3OpMNpmHymGvfomPX0ae/aAPFm3pKvcrUB7EbLKMSuEIOkw== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=k20260515 header.b=Bvu4++Ow; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=100.103.45.18 Received: from smtp.kernel.org (quasi.space.kernel.org [100.103.45.18]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature ECDSA (prime256v1)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 96118606A323; Mon, 26 Oct 2026 14:31:16 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key, unprotected) header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=k20260515 header.b=Bvu4++Ow Received: by smtp.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 077A91F01825; Mon, 26 Oct 2026 14:31:15 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=kernel.org; s=k20260515; t=1793025076; bh=HHYZN7CUNSVC86iKOqMGjhaR96VGj0GsKVxO2ePAdxU=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:In-Reply-To:References; b=Bvu4++OwAGVMLQ16yY85QEzvab4FU9r/RLkombk+8WziaGpwdrl9QXwIpuZv+5NP7 6AHYU2waZPDWZ/I5v63v65bImurDsoUN/G7fEHIqUieNkxz3ZXNNau5vcc/CDDmbDa mmSCreJn18/wb41wKRbfo6OaMjF05WYkfPrAfQKqaSbuYpbkNABoUam2Goe7Xk3Zbz wEKYIedkH2rLNDFkW5rftn+aRFc+bYkwhLBs28Yn76Kbwaf2Y2nc+03EFe6kXfnRuP Yi9NXbujFsfSFP80yAkcP8eR2bSkKhCqyrNwtGwJjuba8tO+Vc77pSqbY+E6rohhYc vzlNhN7SKEvzA== From: SJ Park To: Manuel Ebner Cc: SJ Park , Aveline Noir , Jonathan Corbet , Shuah Khan , Randy Dunlap , damon@lists.linux.dev, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH 2/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat: fix pronoun agreement Date: Mon, 26 Oct 2026 07:31:07 -0700 Message-ID: <20261026143109.150059-1-sj@kernel.org> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.47.3 In-Reply-To: <203ef50d11ae600ab06546d73a2290f291381551.camel@mailbox.org> References: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: List-Owner: Precedence: list MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit On Mon, 26 Oct 2026 13:44:55 +0100 Manuel Ebner wrote: > Hi Aveline, > > On Mon, 2026-10-26 at 22:14 +1100, Aveline Noir wrote: > > "converts it" refers to the access events, so I think it should be > > "them".  Rewrap the paragraph while at it. > > > > Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir > > --- > >  Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst | 8 ++++---- > >  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) > > > > diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst > > index 4a9db755a526..a93609649a5f 100644 > > --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst > > +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst > > Here I found this one: > @@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ enabled > > Enable or disable DAMON_STAT. > > -You can enable DAMON_STAT by setting the value of this parameter as ``Y``. > -Setting it as ``N`` disables DAMON_STAT. The default value is set by > +You can enable DAMON_STAT by setting the value of this parameter to ``Y``. > +Setting it to ``N`` disables DAMON_STAT. The default value is set by > ``CONFIG_DAMON_STAT_ENABLED_DEFAULT`` build config option. Thanks. Unless Aveline objects or add this part to the next revision of this patch, I will add this when I apply this patch to damon/next. > > > @@ -68,10 +68,10 @@ estimated_memory_bandwidth > >  Estimated memory bandwidth consumption (bytes per second) of the system. > >   > >  DAMON_STAT reads observed access events on the current DAMON results snapshot > > -and converts it to memory bandwidth consumption estimation in bytes per second. > > -The resulting metric is exposed to user via this read-only parameter.  Because > > -DAMON uses sampling, this is only an estimation of the access intensity rather > > -than accurate memory bandwidth. > > +and converts them to memory bandwidth consumption estimation in bytes per > > +second.  The resulting metric is exposed to user via this read-only parameter. > > +Because DAMON uses sampling, this is only an estimation of the access intensity > > +rather than accurate memory bandwidth. > >   > >  memory_idle_ms_percentiles > >  -------------------------- > > > Thanks, > Reviewed-by: Manuel Ebner Thank you for your review. Thanks, SJ