From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=100.103.45.18 ARC-Seal: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; t=1793026465; b=lNle1YxoIuOXKAO3wwuKDPfGiZe1GR4PManZQH0WSiTsYrS1oFOHmMhL99WTqUCupos1 cvYZ3Rr5Hkv+Y++uDermwCfV1T19omSQGvzNGZ0sOs3wXQ0ELQRQ0abMH6oUs8KDnwWHk TFtp/L5fkZmPjjIhW97CV3th1+Hb+lv/OpNyZKt+pGAkPANfHPtlGsrJBQK2qKeDuZ9mg ly3OZDzn6wOkWAq6+KhF/ynL823wcCl40MpN1PCb5H6HSLrtyvSY384cRvEgJ1cl6JvfD oiPcWq/SuU7I0J0m4G+ckCoP/l/ZjMo4LYB0igQxYZiCS8ns2sQhOqpbpF2lF755fIQ== ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; t=1793026465; h=Received:DKIM-Signature:From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:Message-ID:X-Mailer: In-Reply-To:References:MIME-Version:Content-Transfer-Encoding; bh=AsSM5NtB7qFzzfdTKjGygUEvP/PLSZ0yfQxJlbFW6Yw=; b=tMFFOKWAyjV9FqhDqqSF7rrbRPxboVx4PKj/+aGUTb/MLZ8zGg+3ifV2PO2CrkZ5bNdV fOnUsBoOGFQB+XQeyzaeXyO9wwbaBBWVBA3tWW3pBH9y0TChEuaEp8qyKTZR41cHyDPBx fYRam6BU1Irt0lZo4ll0ArfCC1Jl9qa3/RmoUHkD48L34XPQp9TpoMkDZ218jZKawkwAd FzFpyX1x/YNzH+qsx+5N/tONoPr0Y1LcWCmHOfPAjQ0NEvNJ5bL8kIt3NFPAv0BlcVbFQ qExV5SULF35nof/L/QP2WRKSvumNSp4zRmr+BXe61wRjJD2Z3vdRKNNbeEuMwXCqwtQ== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=k20260515 header.b=mM1Mmixo; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=100.103.45.18 Received: from smtp.kernel.org (quasi.space.kernel.org [100.103.45.18]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature ECDSA (prime256v1)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id B02F8606A31B; Mon, 26 Oct 2026 14:54:24 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key, unprotected) header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=k20260515 header.b=mM1Mmixo Received: by smtp.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id F27A71F01825; Mon, 26 Oct 2026 14:54:23 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=kernel.org; s=k20260515; t=1793026464; bh=AsSM5NtB7qFzzfdTKjGygUEvP/PLSZ0yfQxJlbFW6Yw=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:In-Reply-To:References; b=mM1MmixoH68pbNiAXJycnQtTEeaPFCUPUoB+GZpt9547zsYusm/yMT9IgTdypw2Un ZBu6oW11WvFBctxkQ9r9U0nE+i0JoF/FsCCYdNFPKqgQWoCVw+3nvSyowzRtIxdIVC 4ZwTJA4xAp4n5FSsoqU9jP9AqvlVFqXzkDp3W63INSFFotBWKAVJNSFOUy7zmlTvXO nuTdgLOVGKUZN7d3e6lRziBkF9A2kcVBjcrNxLS16k3BLPYURoe1xP+xoj9oT1rz41 AdfUZOINoJtz9giy7YSM1s84r+HHDY5IQCkxrEItZFa763FeuKk95RO8niShmBt5n7 PG6c/k1JR9eQg== From: SJ Park To: Aveline Noir Cc: SJ Park , Jonathan Corbet , Shuah Khan , Randy Dunlap , Manuel Ebner , damon@lists.linux.dev, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH 5/8] Docs/mm/damon/design: fix grammar and typos Date: Mon, 26 Oct 2026 07:54:16 -0700 Message-ID: <20261026145417.150739-1-sj@kernel.org> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.47.3 In-Reply-To: <179301327249.2.12612582132957329203.damon-docs-grammar-5@gmail.com> References: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: List-Owner: Precedence: list MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit On Mon, 26 Oct 2026 22:14:37 +1100 Aveline Noir wrote: > The design doc has quite a few relative clauses that seem to have lost > their verb, like "pages that assumed to have" or "filters that handled > by the core layer". Fix those, along with some agreement issues and a > couple of typos: "Parreto", and "Use space", which I think should be > "User space". Rewrap where the lines got too long. > > Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir Reviewed-by: SJ Park Thanks, SJ [...]