From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=100.103.45.18 ARC-Seal: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; t=1793026772; b=wgP6GrgOq0gEOqM1fV0ggo+krUB4FnI4LVacbH7XG5akp8wTnM0PzBvCepblKJiOTD6y 9+e0oaE/lTHzEYYcDixwwDYcfxm9ymcspd+M0czKIxD2Qqe7qidnJV71qVnvuuScCMj56 cMlGfL92Er6wjM80FeFT1akOoCDHZE9ebYXx08B/+ddldpkkZmjAb525WbNTU7TPu0l6C nsYo/t5Uu+yIfh8X0E7fsN5/efSNGBWP4w7j6k1oOOKi9jzxHK1uiLNWvG88EEUWzLOli Qu/pXTSWDopltwHrKYo0c0CqWgQtXpqBntcYUGmUwAX8tDu/WuXw5Al0ZnGPN2J//0Q== ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; t=1793026772; h=Received:DKIM-Signature:From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:Message-ID:X-Mailer: In-Reply-To:References:MIME-Version:Content-Transfer-Encoding; bh=5XGT9zayb74NMaQfkHtdMf2rxcAZC1OQzMLQh8262C4=; b=keJ3mDXqY7EiaZHTDdG57WyQmXQtOut2ujXWqfFLNkVxO5mPYSYxN4cOFDaOpKlXlE3m IQ5aagQOX2B/La8B/7Y8osuDq0RS9J/JYYJIXL3Og2eylu4xthVoEOH5YAoT971kb8ZNr lwNOlKZi/8Fdw/7MPQf7jj6M1eIEJAfAAUal01KyasLqWOB+isSuNvcFyx/TolNOrmuo/ tqoQtLLkRBSBPbMEBpWijPZ/daO10hbWgYC6FwjbWgoXTL6HFk/EEcnDFC0aOaUpUQG1T IIsdUsoO0371SUkM7WZqHWVLATOrEpdGqBHVrdSQKohg5K0rUxKeJxq1TLHal4L5TFw== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=k20260515 header.b=Q5+lXO5E; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=100.103.45.18 Received: from smtp.kernel.org (quasi.space.kernel.org [100.103.45.18]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature ECDSA (prime256v1)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 33E1D606A31A; Mon, 26 Oct 2026 14:59:31 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key, unprotected) header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=k20260515 header.b=Q5+lXO5E Received: by smtp.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 2E98A1F01825; Mon, 26 Oct 2026 14:59:31 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=kernel.org; s=k20260515; t=1793026771; bh=5XGT9zayb74NMaQfkHtdMf2rxcAZC1OQzMLQh8262C4=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:In-Reply-To:References; b=Q5+lXO5EpTR35gK7UDBt9Dr29o4Ac65z6kAbDynbPJdj5oe3/UV8IoH5cEByDCTrj z8MQbpxrHEdtfP7wfQD2bdG1cppB70hJUeakAyZaKls7m1GYc0oQd9kowzyyXa6gkL OyL9qwY2NeZiAu2oaD89cJd2RkAlSMN+0IvS6YlIFAhjx8m0Mb/tSMgcJfu4cNDyn0 kjTt2cR90jqwR544omfMrplkKXjARr63p5+556Epuk2l8DLXBII349bxY5QL/ToIkD YzNqD9y0KUirtbu6yabSHcwAO7Qu2q/2LOt196AGS714jv02m3PqUfdPC7waeVt5fq ZF4W5YqQZOISQ== From: SJ Park To: Aveline Noir Cc: SJ Park , Jonathan Corbet , Shuah Khan , Randy Dunlap , Manuel Ebner , damon@lists.linux.dev, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH 8/8] Docs/mm/damon/monitoring_intervals_tuning_example: fix grammar and typos Date: Mon, 26 Oct 2026 07:59:23 -0700 Message-ID: <20261026145924.151190-1-sj@kernel.org> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.47.3 In-Reply-To: <179301327249.2.2968995103662294177.damon-docs-grammar-8@gmail.com> References: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: List-Owner: Precedence: list MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit On Mon, 26 Oct 2026 22:14:40 +1100 Aveline Noir wrote: > Fix a few typos, including "Moniting" in the title, and some grammar in > the interval tuning example. > > "starts looking degrading" should be "start looking degraded for", as I > think the sentence means the cold region detection starts to look worse. > Rewrap where the lines got too long. > > Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir Reviewed-by: SJ Park Thanks, SJ [...]