From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=100.103.45.18 ARC-Seal: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; t=1793059908; b=RIieyEqrYCIs1E/RuHx7QCqFr/JBP2yIguyqbx9AThbzI53GRXnlN7wRzYvE025P74/t kH2e0B4UzJVEQ9kC9+YQ6O2+4Z4zFpD1W2mG/Ot/R+781TmzteCz+YfYLwpQrccXQk/GS 1nii1Sua4nnsQhsVmgmpwkdBCyMUcj5KQPePqOi6/CPQEO+fb3JR/Z/xUcT4YsX3G+fF5 BZXPpAMZE/gWDKZL0Ss+ZfIwzZCXU5pcv5Rd4yZbkISaBOZHjkTSnjt2hQrC706i8zU81 omNuuMtqmBt3UHyeWfmApApHx6jhyGAbfJt3c5ghoBaCJr0GheFuiu/R6tPUhkr1KRw== ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; t=1793059908; h=Received:DKIM-Signature:From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:Message-ID:X-Mailer: In-Reply-To:References:MIME-Version:Content-Type: Content-Transfer-Encoding; bh=U1SFQNo+l1KuH2xYEh9agzXyBaFApHyliTW2I3WAcVs=; b=uWyRepCpFEE9V8nx1xHbR1lUHvxy0G/asURJtwnU+rQj494ItLvdxZgzxtk3iq8sklA4 FXacnFWppy88uYiTMeTDOZSYsBKt9reYlULhNcIeECfY21DOlbaZaRqVyv9D/hfnB9Pvr YgKTPqeL4BSZuxUkjQOjN+rtNlUdy5OcUastRYFbgVLbs1tT7gWPj8ZdbN3Jq2qBqUj8b GPNib/dDic0gEiqad5rC+TOJ6tzRnEUlQblysnHMXiothoQu7ur21+OwcS4TEzQ4HR08c uqaAzgfr7wnAjkIWt7w2hHlfsuvYU/ZtYyW2JIr99cgV+BktptQcXcS+vpPOQNKazHA== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=k20260515 header.b=Bc71X7f4; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=100.103.45.18 Received: from smtp.kernel.org (quasi.space.kernel.org [100.103.45.18]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature ECDSA (prime256v1)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id F2841606A31A; Tue, 27 Oct 2026 00:11:47 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key, unprotected) header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=k20260515 header.b=Bc71X7f4 Received: by smtp.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 834D31F01825; Tue, 27 Oct 2026 00:11:47 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=kernel.org; s=k20260515; t=1793059907; bh=U1SFQNo+l1KuH2xYEh9agzXyBaFApHyliTW2I3WAcVs=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:In-Reply-To:References; b=Bc71X7f4rfISVUR0Q+mRib4UDa8SXxUWoc6UT2xY2SO2fApAG1z/OSEaUSnyeo4Br 8peydQWyrzSfkCwNYMC0wjL41Y0vFPFhG49//dKT9C7skO2pobu6cL9sgI2IRWlu4o LCLFeRqX9snStGV5ZPsMzuFhV2a4vDFLpw3qQjRgROrukMZhWJk9bl+Vj1m8QapCMg 5/imp6wcDRWsxCKqGsmloSl4mypLGVsPfloszOFnwWua1Q0pkxYFo81a0AtaiBXuNo o9q0MVyWgdBSoReJUwKntEURHZH5IqJKa6yRn11hDHMtu4D9d3rlafywHeTkxwFaHR smupkFF+1f5lg== From: SJ Park To: Manuel Ebner Cc: SJ Park , Jonathan Corbet , Shuah Khan , Randy Dunlap , damon@lists.linux.dev, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Aveline Noir Subject: Re: [PATCH] mm/damon/reclaim: improve grammar and style Date: Mon, 26 Oct 2026 17:11:39 -0700 Message-ID: <20261027001140.156967-1-sj@kernel.org> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.47.3 In-Reply-To: <72437017a038310cad48a5ff488377a9f8eb89f1.camel@mailbox.org> References: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: List-Owner: Precedence: list MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit On Mon, 26 Oct 2026 18:51:40 +0100 Manuel Ebner wrote: > Hi, > > took me some time to respond because of the procrastinations. No worry! > > On Sat, 2026-10-17 at 09:27 -0700, SJ Park wrote: > > On Sat, 17 Oct 2026 11:18:34 +0200 Manuel Ebner wrote: > > > > > Hi SJ, > > > > > > On Thu, 2026-10-15 at 07:01 -0700, SJ Park wrote: > > > > On Thu, 15 Oct 2026 10:06:23 +0200 Manuel Ebner wrote: > > > > > > > > > Fix tenses. Replace 'set as' with 'set to'. > > > > > Rewrite complex sentences. > > > > > > > > Let's put two sentences in one line, while breaking it for the 75 column limit. > > > > > > Will do. > > > > > > > > [...] > > > > > @@ -113,8 +113,8 @@ quota_sz > > > > >   > > > > >  Limit of size of memory for the reclamation in bytes. > > > > >   > > > > > -DAMON_RECLAIM charges amount of memory which it tried to reclaim within a time > > > > > -window (quota_reset_interval_ms) and makes no more than this limit is tried. > > > > > +DAMON_RECLAIM recordes the amount of memory which it tried to reclaim within a time > > > > > > > > s/recordes/charges/  or s/recordes/records/ ? > > > > > > For me charge is such a weird word exepct in 'charge a battery' or 'charge a fee'. And > > > 'recordes' is a typo. Does this work: > > > > 'charge' in this sentence is somewhat like 'charge a fee'.  I personally don't > > feel it is weird.  But 'record' also work for me. > > I will keep 'charge' at the later mention in the file. Thank you for accepting my humble suggestion. [...] > > Sounds good.  But let's finish the discussion about use of the term, 'charge' > > before posting v2. > > Then I'll head to [v2] and make it a 2 part series. Looking forward to v2! Thanks, SJ [...]