From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=80.241.56.171 ARC-Seal: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; t=1793127781; b=uPeF5S6f4SpYLqK5j1F5yK/Vs0xMtE/enLTjdytd/+FFg2dlTjXTGGkQDyzUkcV3bCs4 rjoCEPLHFQjbDZr5Mj2dNh4RfH/aX57c25l5+X81PEiHr2s5aD9dE+PGU0QuzBQDs3F+t isnSmA0sDBOhy98pIL8OhcXBXpm3H4ypGGtNekJTMH+qMrCceHd7iCCuR0OiKJjoSzQGG gXCNNl4aRCmzDUrlz1bd0VNoHsHxlfo5wUJ21q4Q2qiGBphpcKOpiwNxWz9ndB4p+FQDU PH1cNOPrGFfu9lRwSE+uC2T8jI+X73nhLPH4xbYXGlqpCw2uGn52GidKOI3hkD90THw== ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; t=1793127781; h=DMARC-Filter:Received:DKIM-Signature:From:To:Cc:Subject:Date: Message-ID:X-Mailer:MIME-Version:Content-Transfer-Encoding: X-MBO-RS-ID:X-MBO-RS-META; bh=1jtA5ybr8vFxqljpK300PDPycf6HryqQqX763TrmniE=; b=bIag20Ce1TLZDO7BE/zcXPoeDD+97868duVexZYTEMVwlU51fgfOf88DUHtcEiukYbVk zi6lBif9jL5szcJOXsZI/IR7qiIekcOH36xlIv9fKhWhtecgTSgX2zzyj2nNMUWhKw8LR q5XXMTg6sLHBgASMVAl3LuiwuL2dHEZ0NUW645/n27wPqI0sN3yb4JcIazt+RWSIn/nj4 80gwL6Wo/KeUzzc+TRVuifQUqs7ESnGEjKI3Z3h0es/7hu6Mhvnmlfv4ArZUVx5cxIDbr S4QxufBcldSpBaDbjVke0sjDwfNRcPJh2p775GbTAZRW3q3iTmyYuAUXsclPoDECOKg== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass header.from=mailbox.org; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=mailbox.org; dkim=pass header.d=mailbox.org header.i=@mailbox.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=mail20150812 header.b=Nt6KpMmo; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=80.241.56.171 Received: from mout-p-201.mailbox.org (mout-p-201.mailbox.org [80.241.56.171]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature ECDSA (prime256v1) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 34AF3606A31A; Tue, 27 Oct 2026 19:02:55 +0000 (UTC) DMARC-Filter: OpenDMARC Filter v1.4.2 smtp.subspace.kernel.org 34AF3606A31A Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=reject dis=none) header.from=mailbox.org Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=mailbox.org Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key, unprotected) header.d=mailbox.org header.i=@mailbox.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=mail20150812 header.b=Nt6KpMmo Received: from smtp2.mailbox.org (smtp2.mailbox.org [IPv6:2001:67c:2050:b231:465::2]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519MLKEM768 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by mout-p-201.mailbox.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4jDfyM4cmKzMkr0; Tue, 27 Oct 2026 20:02:51 +0100 (CET) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=mailbox.org; s=mail20150812; t=1793127771; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:cc:mime-version:mime-version: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; bh=1jtA5ybr8vFxqljpK300PDPycf6HryqQqX763TrmniE=; b=Nt6KpMmot4zqA3t1yOECOI7SB5/sV4SAONLx758SqvyYG61B9XsZnK2eSKuGsLhy+ApIYv Hy7cx4hqmrpLgYGBbE42Z7dwIKm8p/WfGnB4a3RpTbKw1YYJsAyrTyJ0LKJtPjkt2Di0Jh bYoFDMWTVY2bSe842g+3YLukT8NxZlSAVcwAUBCAlI/Mx3eei5+KOLu71s4bZrejr+I8yr DNPyJQn8luYhVsbyLsKRYaLVqfQfQRG/ufMmPjzWYgcxJmPpn0kR5sxHrxsCBH/cnqGZbA kWn6Kshk1uZddkRl4+G6zrdjQwqDu9PHuZcyACSj+h2N0pnQbYt4dBUUYhf9og== From: Manuel Ebner To: SJ Park , Jonathan Corbet , Shuah Khan , Randy Dunlap Cc: Manuel Ebner , Aveline Noir , damon@lists.linux.dev, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: [PATCH v2 0/2] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim: improve language Date: Tue, 27 Oct 2026 19:59:38 +0100 Message-ID: <20261027185938.2526259-2-manuelebnerli@mailbox.org> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.55.0 X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: List-Owner: Precedence: list MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-MBO-RS-ID: 165968dc3b9658f2d5e X-MBO-RS-META: ekir4kjfqi65edx5rn14zxbd1xffynbs I went through the mails and divided the diffs and suggestions into two patches. That's why some changes of [PATCH 1] get deleted or written over in [PATCH 2]. I keept lines with barely over 80 chars and didn't fix wrong upper-case in headings. I prefer uppercase Nouns(sic). @SJ I hope I got everything. If you have the urge to change or add anything feel free to do so. [v2] Include suggestions from SJ and Aveline Split [v1] into [1/2 v2] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim: improve grammar and style [2/2 v2] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim: rewrite complex parts Fixed an upper case and a missing double space -> [1/2 v2] [v1] https://lore.kernel.org/all/20261015080623.808458-2-manuelebnerli@mailbox.org/