From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=100.103.45.18 ARC-Seal: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; t=1793146005; b=jcdapvF6guWkah3wNrykGGRWMx+VAFDzpl58LVaaWUCKzIFlP+RoV5mMwkUFJiCNMpCE KS151/OpcAr2sNWWZ3c6GevP4VQbHQrDq3BRce4canJu3YG+BI47jFwmobm35D16Ok1zo REjQ+tk/xNILFBCsf4dZy94kuO37hwtt0Z6VgG7EQjaflnr3i1mVROwK70dOwhtVTcvp0 Zt10jb2a3+B/cTX35xd755wkF3exCcRcZmDfupflgFRt93YFUU+VR/aEM1p2mT82tDgOz ugKOsjyAGI9b2svbOAW9wVyhhF7jVXXKW0L7G7RZBWLQBMNqQ94wX4N3tKgCzo9WE7g== ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc20261015; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; t=1793146005; h=Received:DKIM-Signature:From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:Message-ID:X-Mailer: In-Reply-To:References:MIME-Version:Content-Transfer-Encoding; bh=skEiRkHWE+hnvc3/6Bu0ehaCi2IzacU7F2ubFvDKDvI=; b=FJd18IHe4lXQxGzjJrmrOj5K5tN/EJ3kGhLySskT+WZ1A82shHbvkZhfomOfJSQMnZjk 9l/SCWNFq7IsSWSFxHRm6WYI/FOSMlzEuY8dhcVUNKPa+BNI0cRozJqqCgh1e1GK5PIna NutgPISP/YrhoihFCJr8GTXLEdFK2u1oECoKumPtQWhVxFS7uDgYGbzXehX+HazHjqap+ 9XfPCWJ5kwgtzb7ZhJpY5CReNWB3yRcqnrNJmOQtOrbuDILjpW86z0Nln0sxpaSZo+EzF XSWCPPq6+tlluVMNBgeDMjmolFa6d2pp8ADyp6KewIJkkHrzxQHZSo95uYCpK//8Bpw== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=k20260515 header.b=aw5uQyVc; arc=none smtp.remote-ip=100.103.45.18 Received: from smtp.kernel.org (quasi.space.kernel.org [100.103.45.18]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature ECDSA (prime256v1) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 28DBC606A31A; Wed, 28 Oct 2026 00:06:44 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key, unprotected) header.d=kernel.org header.i=@kernel.org header.a=rsa-sha256 header.s=k20260515 header.b=aw5uQyVc Received: by smtp.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 5B71B1F01825; Wed, 28 Oct 2026 00:06:44 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=kernel.org; s=k20260515; t=1793146004; bh=skEiRkHWE+hnvc3/6Bu0ehaCi2IzacU7F2ubFvDKDvI=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:Date:In-Reply-To:References; b=aw5uQyVcvUVcveSh7K0iQyIeOrp93TXa37xDmxv8jtEjFdd+gd12i98k4oFF+dLH7 Oc4j52g38SdjU3js+RwKx6LxGjjebgJAKoEDrJCIYpEBTKEpNo6QM8zB+4IRhiH3xU wXNcyQ6m36F8wiWEPFEpfd32LGh6R/MRBDZWfuPWyhZOWymY2uzK/KTRwKpN+NWLlv 2rOZWzSSRgNaHglsAcvMsafcZCaqlqV2RQ3Cx5ITiIeCeakq+Np6KEh4aOkhbywjWG DfU3ELOPRgKOPswvZAAQGZqpb3/yc/0Zb5gnbwqeuPrgwVGgF6r0RLinVG8tYXMxbd Y7RNSFD+Y4Ddw== From: SJ Park To: Manuel Ebner Cc: SJ Park , corbet@lwn.net, damon@lists.linux.dev, jm5905938@gmail.com, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-mm@kvack.org, rdunlap@infradead.org, skhan@linuxfoundation.org Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 1/2] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim: improve grammar and style Date: Tue, 27 Oct 2026 17:06:36 -0700 Message-ID: <20261028000637.157110-1-sj@kernel.org> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.47.3 In-Reply-To: <20261027190503.2526945-2-manuelebnerli@mailbox.org> References: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: List-Owner: Precedence: list MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit On Tue, 27 Oct 2026 20:05:04 +0100 Manuel Ebner wrote: > Fix upper case. Fix tenses. Replace 'set as' with 'set to'. Add space after > sentence to make it double space. > > Signed-off-by: Manuel Ebner > CC: Aveline Noir > --- > @ -113,8 +113,8 > Choose as you wish. > > @ 20 > should be: > -Free Pages Reporting [3]_ based > +Free pages reporting [3]_ based > or > +'*Free Pages Reporting'* [3]_ based > * the right kind of quoting/ kernel-doc highlighting. > Choose as you wish. > --- > .../admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst | 36 +++++++++---------- > 1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst > index e4e2ffa52e..0bab2299ea 100644 > --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst > +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst [...] > @@ -30,12 +30,12 @@ guests could mitigate this problem. > How It Works? > ============= > > -DAMON_RECLAIM finds memory regions that didn't accessed for specific time > +DAMON_RECLAIM finds memory regions that weren't accessed for specific time > duration and page out. To avoid it consuming too much CPU for the paging out > operation, a speed limit can be configured. Under the speed limit, it pages > -out memory regions that didn't accessed longer time first. System > +out memory regions that weren't accessed longer time first. System > administrators can also configure under what situation this scheme should > -automatically activated and deactivated with three memory pressure watermarks. > +automatically be activated and deactivated with three memory pressure watermarks. Let's keep 80 columns limit. Same for below. [...] > @@ -113,10 +113,10 @@ quota_sz > > Limit of size of memory for the reclamation in bytes. > > -DAMON_RECLAIM charges amount of memory which it tried to reclaim within a time > -window (quota_reset_interval_ms) and makes no more than this limit is tried. > -This can be used for limiting consumption of CPU and IO. If this value is > -zero, the limit is disabled. > +DAMON_RECLAIM records the amount of memory which it tried to reclaim within a time Didn't we agree to keep use "charge" ? Other than the above two things, looks good to me. Thanks, SJ [...]