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Mon, 26 Oct 2026 13:44:57 +0100 (CET) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=mailbox.org; s=mail20150812; t=1793018697; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=gNSvfMB+KSu6h3D0gLvM2K+YtllhQPeCS/Txg2cf7IA=; b=tYzOSWiMgAO6iqMmGbzPgi7ambZF9u29A0182Egf/5Y8KqLX/99xqmrfu+u0IIVVZtVU6w YNU3sj7Q11Xdyq6RU6XsdvmYlmAn8uwxk5YKI0J+CLEO2Yv6t231xxmAXWJAMQK//DxFCz c/kvG6zon4JtTiOX22JjdxDJiH7mN19P+65Y1AAFqK7DjGuqBSNrAB54f+SOpXBrufwfOK GZzlmCCcsdj+QxmIR+i6V8RWzl7FNa+PPnQZ2OXfy81KLTc+y72RVBCGyF6YbD79J3MZO+ Fk4jtdS3iAhHL29UUmHx0Smk8Q1Lwse2FLBYu1vXJYkJc3RWfyjOcLXQ0pX/cQ== Message-ID: <203ef50d11ae600ab06546d73a2290f291381551.camel@mailbox.org> Subject: Re: [PATCH 2/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat: fix pronoun agreement From: Manuel Ebner To: Aveline Noir , SJ Park Cc: Jonathan Corbet , Shuah Khan , Randy Dunlap , damon@lists.linux.dev, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Date: Mon, 26 Oct 2026 13:44:55 +0100 In-Reply-To: <179301327249.2.17530814278215474568.damon-docs-grammar-2@gmail.com> References: <179301327249.2.4690198998605536207.damon-docs-grammar-0@gmail.com> <179301327249.2.17530814278215474568.damon-docs-grammar-2@gmail.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable User-Agent: Evolution 3.60.2 (3.60.2-1.fc44) X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: List-Owner: Precedence: list MIME-Version: 1.0 X-MBO-RS-META: mkyds7qstpeqe1s9cnddd6e1xznqfuib X-MBO-RS-ID: 34eaf3e72545e878961 Hi Aveline, On Mon, 2026-10-26 at 22:14 +1100, Aveline Noir wrote: > "converts it" refers to the access events, so I think it should be > "them".=C2=A0 Rewrap the paragraph while at it. >=20 > Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir > --- > =C2=A0Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst | 8 ++++---- > =C2=A01 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) >=20 > diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst b/Documentation/= admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst > index 4a9db755a526..a93609649a5f 100644 > --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst > +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst Here I found this one: @@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ enabled =20 Enable or disable DAMON_STAT. =20 -You can enable DAMON_STAT by setting the value of this parameter as ``Y``. -Setting it as ``N`` disables DAMON_STAT. The default value is set by +You can enable DAMON_STAT by setting the value of this parameter to ``Y``. +Setting it to ``N`` disables DAMON_STAT. The default value is set by ``CONFIG_DAMON_STAT_ENABLED_DEFAULT`` build config option. =20 > @@ -68,10 +68,10 @@ estimated_memory_bandwidth > =C2=A0Estimated memory bandwidth consumption (bytes per second) of the sy= stem. > =C2=A0 > =C2=A0DAMON_STAT reads observed access events on the current DAMON result= s snapshot > -and converts it to memory bandwidth consumption estimation in bytes per = second. > -The resulting metric is exposed to user via this read-only parameter.=C2= =A0 Because > -DAMON uses sampling, this is only an estimation of the access intensity = rather > -than accurate memory bandwidth. > +and converts them to memory bandwidth consumption estimation in bytes pe= r > +second.=C2=A0 The resulting metric is exposed to user via this read-only= parameter. > +Because DAMON uses sampling, this is only an estimation of the access in= tensity > +rather than accurate memory bandwidth. > =C2=A0 > =C2=A0memory_idle_ms_percentiles > =C2=A0-------------------------- Thanks, Reviewed-by: Manuel Ebner