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From: David Howells <dhowells@redhat.com>
To: Michael Kerrisk <mtk@man7.org>
Cc: dhowells@redhat.com, lkml <linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org>,
	Eugene Syromyatnikov <evgsyr@gmail.com>,
	keyrings@vger.kernel.org, linux-man <linux-man@vger.kernel.org>
Subject: Re: Revised keyrings(7) man page for review
Date: Tue, 13 Dec 2016 11:35:31 +0000	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <25262.1481628931@warthog.procyon.org.uk> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <51643019-bb42-4066-c824-c55b9e668ac6@man7.org>

Michael Kerrisk <mtk@man7.org> wrote:

>        The  Linux key-management facility is primarily a way for driv‐
>        ers to retain or  cache  security  data,  authentication  keys,
>        encryption keys, and other data in the kernel.

No comma before "and".

>        access to the facility.  See keyctl(1),  keyctl(3),  and  keyu‐

Ditto.  (And some other dittos).

>               to the kernel when it was requested.   (Details  can  be
>               found in request_key(2).)

How about dropping the brackets and making that last sentence "For further
details, see request_key(2)."

>               beyond the usual user, group, and other (see below).

I think this needs to say what below one is supposed to see:

"beyond the usual User, Group and Other (see 'Possession' below)."

>    Key types
>        The facility provides several basic types of key:

Again, I think the keyring type needs to go either first or last.

>        "big_key" (since Linux 3.13)
>               This  key type is similar to the "user" key type, but it
>               may hold a payload of up to 1MiB in size.  The data  may
>               be stored in the swap space rather than in kernel memory

stored encrypted (as of 4.8).

>    Anchoring keys
>        To prevent a key from being prematurely garbage  collected,  it
>        must  anchored  to keep its reference count elevated when it is
>        not in active use by the kernel.

I think "prematurely" is unnecessary here.

>        (3) The search of the keyring tree is in preorder: each keyring
>            is searched first for a match, then the  keyrings  referred
>            to by that keyring are searched.

"preorder"?  How about "breadth-first order"?

>               The  only keys included in the list are those that grant
>               view permission to the reading  process,  regardless  of
>               whether  or  not it possesses them.  LSM security checks
>               are still performed, and may  filter  out  further  keys
>               that the process is not authorized to view.

This is correct.  See proc_keys_show() in security/keys/proc.c:

	rc = key_task_permission(key_ref, ctx.cred, KEY_NEED_VIEW);
	if (rc < 0)
		return 0;

Possibly it shouldn't be, but for now it is.

>                      D   The key is dead (i.e., has been deleted).  (A
>                          key  may  be  briefly  in  this  state during
>                          garbage collection.)

No - "dead" in this context means that the key type was unregistered.

>               Description
>                      The key description (name).
> 
>               Description
>                      This field contains descriptive information about

Merge?

David

  parent reply	other threads:[~2016-12-13 11:35 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 11+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2016-11-04 15:47 Michael Kerrisk
2016-11-26 12:51 ` Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)
2016-12-13 11:35 ` David Howells [this message]
2016-12-13 12:43   ` Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)
2016-12-13 12:57     ` Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)
2016-12-13 13:38     ` David Howells
2016-12-13 13:52       ` Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)
2016-12-13 14:20       ` David Howells
2016-12-14  7:27         ` Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)
2016-12-13 13:31   ` David Howells
2016-12-13 13:41     ` Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)

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