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charset="us-ascii" Content-ID: MIME-Version: 1.0 X-OriginatorOrg: fb.com X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-AuthAs: Internal X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-AuthSource: CY4PR15MB1781.namprd15.prod.outlook.com X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-Network-Message-Id: d389b1bc-8b8b-4ae4-7982-08da848c1f46 X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-originalarrivaltime: 22 Aug 2022 22:17:38.1034 (UTC) X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-fromentityheader: Hosted X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-id: 8ae927fe-1255-47a7-a2af-5f3a069daaa2 X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-mailboxtype: HOSTED X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-userprincipalname: 0/AgFsKTQG8yQ43Y/1yQ6HP17iKNDxCZ4FeMkRDxLtDWiYVh3W2Pnr2XiEewHklD X-MS-Exchange-Transport-CrossTenantHeadersStamped: MWHPR15MB1533 X-Proofpoint-GUID: 0DoYxsDIG0-QUh_vJlqWX3am4RxDdg2w X-Proofpoint-ORIG-GUID: 0DoYxsDIG0-QUh_vJlqWX3am4RxDdg2w X-Proofpoint-Virus-Version: vendor=baseguard engine=ICAP:2.0.205,Aquarius:18.0.895,Hydra:6.0.517,FMLib:17.11.122.1 definitions=2022-08-22_14,2022-08-22_02,2022-06-22_01 Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org > On Aug 20, 2022, at 1:03 AM, Bagas Sanjaya wrote: > > On 8/20/22 07:00, alexlzhu@fb.com wrote: >> From: Alexander Zhu >> >> Improve grammar on MM concepts documentation. >> >> Signed-off-by: Alexander Zhu >> >> Changes in v3: >> -Correct punctuation based on previous comment >> >> Changes in v2: >> -Correct the subject >> -Adjust the description > > The changelog should be below the dashes. Otherwise LGTM. > > Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya > > -- > An old man doll... just what I always wanted! - Clara Can this be merged then? Or is a v4 needed?