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From: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
To: Johannes Thumshirn <jthumshirn@suse.de>,
	Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
Cc: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH] Documentation: Minor changes to men-chameleon-bus.txt
Date: Wed, 22 Jul 2015 09:33:10 -0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <55AFC5C6.3040002@infradead.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <1437488181-30538-1-git-send-email-jthumshirn@suse.de>

On 07/21/15 07:16, Johannes Thumshirn wrote:
> Change men-chameleon-bus.txt according to the comments made by Randy Dunlap in
> https://lkml.org/lkml/2015/7/17/691.
> 
> These are:
> * Some minor gramatical changes
> * Spelling fixes
> * Write the word "Chameleon" capitalized throughout the whole document
> * Explain MEN as MEN Mikro Elektronik GmbH.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Johannes Thumshirn <jthumshirn@suse.de>
> ---
>  Documentation/men-chameleon-bus.txt | 39 +++++++++++++++++++------------------
>  1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/men-chameleon-bus.txt b/Documentation/men-chameleon-bus.txt
> index 6d7bdb5..39ed5ae 100644
> --- a/Documentation/men-chameleon-bus.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/men-chameleon-bus.txt
> @@ -43,40 +43,41 @@ Table of Contents
>  
>  2 Architecture
>  ===============
> -  MCB is divided in 3 functional blocks:
> +  MCB is divided into 3 functional blocks:
>    - The MEN Chameleon Bus itself,
>    - drivers for MCB Carrier Devices and
>    - the parser for the Chameleon table.
>  
>  2.1 MEN Chameleon Bus
>  ----------------------
> -   The MEN Chameleon Bus is an artificial bus system that attaches to an MEN
> -   Chameleon FPGA device. These devices are multi-function devices implemented
> -   in a single FPGA and usually attached via some sort of PCI or PCIe link. Each
> -   FPGA contains a header section describing the content of the FPGA. The header
> -   lists the device id, PCI BAR, offset from the beginning of the PCI BAR, size
> -   in the FPGA, interrupt number and some other properties currently not handled
> -   by the MCB implementation.
> +   The MEN Chameleon Bus is an artificial bus system that attaches to an so

                                                                      to a

> +   called Chameleon FPGA device found on some Hardware produced my MEN Mikro

                                                 hardware

> +   Elektronik GmbH. These devices are multi-function devices implemented in a
> +   single FPGA and usually attached via some sort of PCI or PCIe link. Each
> +   FPGA contains a header section describing the content of the FPGA. The
> +   header lists the device id, PCI BAR, offset from the beginning of the PCI
> +   BAR, size in the FPGA, interrupt number and some other properties currently
> +   not handled by the MCB implementation.

Thanks for the update.

-- 
~Randy

      reply	other threads:[~2015-07-22 16:34 UTC|newest]

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2015-07-21 14:16 Johannes Thumshirn
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