Re: [PATCH v3 04/13] rust: add pin-init API core

[Andreas Hindborg <nmi@metaspace.dk>]

Alice Ryhl <alice@ryhl.io> writes:

> On 3/30/23 00:33, y86-dev@protonmail.com wrote:
>> From: Benno Lossin <y86-dev@protonmail.com>
>> This API is used to facilitate safe pinned initialization of structs. It
>> replaces cumbersome `unsafe` manual initialization with elegant safe macro
>> invocations.
>> Due to the size of this change it has been split into six commits:
>> 1. This commit introducing the basic public interface: traits and
>>     functions to represent and create initializers.
>> 2. Adds the `#[pin_data]`, `pin_init!`, `try_pin_init!`, `init!` and
>>     `try_init!` macros along with their internal types.
>> 3. Adds the `InPlaceInit` trait that allows using an initializer to create
>>     an object inside of a `Box<T>` and other smart pointers.
>> 4. Adds the `PinnedDrop` trait and adds macro support for it in
>>     the `#[pin_data]` macro.
>> 5. Adds the `stack_pin_init!` macro allowing to pin-initialize a struct on
>>     the stack.
>> 6. Adds the `Zeroable` trait and `init::zeroed` function to initialize
>>     types that have `0x00` in all bytes as a valid bit pattern.
>> Co-developed-by: Gary Guo <gary@garyguo.net>
>> Signed-off-by: Gary Guo <gary@garyguo.net>
>> Signed-off-by: Benno Lossin <y86-dev@protonmail.com>
>
> Reviewed-by: Alice Ryhl <aliceryhl@google.com>
>
>> +//! Aside from pinned initialization, this API also supports in-place construction without pinning,
>> +//! the marcos/types/functions are generally named like the pinned variants without the `pin`
>> +//! prefix.
>
> Typo: Should be "macros".
>
>> +type Invariant<T> = PhantomData<fn(*mut T) -> *mut T>;
>
> I think it would make sense to include a link to the nomicon on the
> documentation for the Invariant type.
>
> E.g. this link: https://doc.rust-lang.org/nomicon/subtyping.html

That would be nice. I think this also applies: https://doc.rust-lang.org/nomicon/phantom-data.html#table-of-phantomdata-patterns

>
>> +// This is the module-internal type implementing `PinInit` and `Init`. It is unsafe to create this
>> +// type, since the closure needs to fulfill the same safety requirement as the
>> +// `__pinned_init`/`__init` functions.
>> +struct InitClosure<F, T: ?Sized, E>(F, Invariant<(E, T)>);
>
> Documentation for a type should use /// rather than //.
>
> I think it would help to call out explicitly in the documentation on this type
> that it is an implementation detail of the pin_init_from_closure and
> init_from_closure methods.