From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 06A93C77B75 for ; Tue, 16 May 2023 18:47:35 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S229968AbjEPSre (ORCPT ); Tue, 16 May 2023 14:47:34 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:55124 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S230158AbjEPSrb (ORCPT ); Tue, 16 May 2023 14:47:31 -0400 Received: from ms.lwn.net (ms.lwn.net [IPv6:2600:3c01:e000:3a1::42]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id CCBDD26B8; Tue, 16 May 2023 11:47:13 -0700 (PDT) Received: from localhost (unknown [IPv6:2601:281:8300:73::5f6]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ms.lwn.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 734BB993; Tue, 16 May 2023 18:47:13 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Filter: OpenDKIM Filter v2.11.0 ms.lwn.net 734BB993 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=lwn.net; s=20201203; t=1684262833; bh=obidCeCWF2KGB0qky+83Ie4e7z76fxG96v1p7sOnKgc=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:In-Reply-To:References:Date:From; b=UwDh5+r5O+CJ/HU2EnwCRTcitbQ95ZmeKnWjlv+4WTk7p17CB+R0/deYSJDsmiOC9 eu3obp2YJ8RpueOL1DpR8p2wfZpcue3u8h4cLYwHIq+eG81giYT8RsKlhbjzHaZI5O 63iU6XLss723Sqc+3PXUQwW7glqkKJf2wCmRGvnlRxjdI8Jb2IXJ0tbjBsvWDy8yJr RVcHL+spTFb50sSf8LAD5+IENxZsRHtGqxdhOkvTd/1H1KYq0m/XFe7VOo8iDbmWgJ 8brbFol4TZ2FAvy9UFIJpzP6pNd6NDDgi/aoX8ToHcOfH6DilUZDcdDRjj0v1YpNQr bPkR1j3VHAe8w== From: Jonathan Corbet To: Thorsten Leemhuis Cc: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH v1] docs: quickly-build-trimmed-linux: various small fixes and improvements In-Reply-To: <6f4684b9a5d11d3adb04e0af3cfc60db8b28eeb2.1684140700.git.linux@leemhuis.info> References: <6f4684b9a5d11d3adb04e0af3cfc60db8b28eeb2.1684140700.git.linux@leemhuis.info> Date: Tue, 16 May 2023 12:47:12 -0600 Message-ID: <87r0rgazbj.fsf@meer.lwn.net> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Thorsten Leemhuis writes: > * improve the short description of localmodconfig in the step-by-step > guide while fixing its broken first sentence > > * briefly mention immutable Linux distributions > > * use '--shallow-exclude=v6.0' throughout the document > > * instead of "git reset --hard; git checkout ..." use "git checkout > --force ..." in the step-by-step guide: this matches the TLDR and is > one command less to execute. This led to a few small adjustments to > the text and the flow in the surrounding area. > > * fix two thinkos in the section explaining full git clones > > Signed-off-by: Thorsten Leemhuis > --- > > Hi. Let me know if you would have prefered this as five seperate > commits. Ciao, Thorsten That would be kind of silly; one patch for a set of fixups like this is fine. > .../quickly-build-trimmed-linux.rst | 49 ++++++++++--------- > 1 file changed, 27 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-) Applied, thanks. jon