From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S937827AbXGRXqh (ORCPT ); Wed, 18 Jul 2007 19:46:37 -0400 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org id S937617AbXGRXnU (ORCPT ); Wed, 18 Jul 2007 19:43:20 -0400 Received: from nz-out-0506.google.com ([64.233.162.230]:19340 "EHLO nz-out-0506.google.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S937610AbXGRXnQ (ORCPT ); Wed, 18 Jul 2007 19:43:16 -0400 DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=PmO01nCMiBh1Khxsrnp+vU4ueAxOAxRzwDGngyvzAfWo3tSVsfVsvs4+r6YBCQzGRs+GLs95MIIV1LBLPWp1pqmxYDA0ruV8EdBvsqY0xRWknx2xPqvJGx9J/Ywv75JUwijKOpt9xdSIinR4NJgh4ihrOwMtgVLcWj4GcdQfLGg= Message-ID: <9a8748490707181643v2ad6b0d0ld44226a367a6f937@mail.gmail.com> Date: Thu, 19 Jul 2007 01:43:14 +0200 From: "Jesper Juhl" To: "Greg Kroah-Hartman" Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/5] HOWTO: add Japanese translation of Documentation/HOWTO Cc: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, "Tsugikazu Shibata" , "IKEDA Munehiro" In-Reply-To: <11848012031961-git-send-email-gregkh@suse.de> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline References: <20070718232346.GB4620@kroah.com> <11848012031961-git-send-email-gregkh@suse.de> Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org On 19/07/07, Greg Kroah-Hartman wrote: > From: Tsugikazu Shibata > > Add the japanese translation of the Documentation/HOWTO file. > A few comments below. > Signed-off-by: Tsugikazu Shibata > Cc: IKEDA Munehiro > Signed-off-by: Greg Kroah-Hartman > --- > Documentation/ja_JP/HOWTO | 650 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ > 1 files changed, 650 insertions(+), 0 deletions(-) > create mode 100644 Documentation/ja_JP/HOWTO > > diff --git a/Documentation/ja_JP/HOWTO b/Documentation/ja_JP/HOWTO > new file mode 100644 > index 0000000..b2446a0 > --- /dev/null > +++ b/Documentation/ja_JP/HOWTO > @@ -0,0 +1,650 @@ > +NOTE: > +This is Japanese translated version of "Documentation/HOWTO". I'd suggest "This is a Japanese translated version ..." or perhaps "This is a version of Documentation/HOWTO translated into Japanese". > +This one is maintained by Tsugikazu Shibata I'd write "This document is maintained by ..." > +and JF Project team . "and the JF Project team ..." > +If you find difference with original file or problem in translation, How about "If you find any difference between this document and the original file or a problem with the translation," > +please contact maintainer of this file or JF project. "please contact the maintainer ..." > + > +Please also note that purpose of this file is easier to read for non > +English natives and not to be intended to fork. So, if you have any > +comments or updates of this file, please try to update Original(English) > +file at first. Shouldn't this be something along the lines of "Please also note that the purpose of this file is to be easier to read for non English (read: Japanese) speakers and is not intended as a fork. So if you have any comments or updates for this file please try to update the original English file first." -- Jesper Juhl Don't top-post http://www.catb.org/~esr/jargon/html/T/top-post.html Plain text mails only, please http://www.expita.com/nomime.html