From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1753163AbaESIG7 (ORCPT ); Mon, 19 May 2014 04:06:59 -0400 Received: from mail-lb0-f178.google.com ([209.85.217.178]:54700 "EHLO mail-lb0-f178.google.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1752771AbaESIG4 (ORCPT ); Mon, 19 May 2014 04:06:56 -0400 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <87eh07bu60.fsf@rustcorp.com.au> References: <20140402144219.4cafbe37@gandalf.local.home> <20140402221212.GD16570@mguzik.redhat.com> <87wqf1oi22.fsf@rustcorp.com.au> <20140502153409.329d3b5b426275e8197251a2@linux-foundation.org> <871tw9c6kt.fsf@rustcorp.com.au> <53678ED6.4070502@infradead.org> <87eh07bu60.fsf@rustcorp.com.au> Date: Mon, 19 May 2014 05:06:54 -0300 Message-ID: Subject: Re: [RFC PATCH] cmdline: Hide "debug" from /proc/cmdline From: Diego Viola To: Rusty Russell Cc: Randy Dunlap , Andrew Morton , Linus Torvalds , Mateusz Guzik , Greg Kroah-Hartman , Steven Rostedt , LKML , Thomas Gleixner , "H. Peter Anvin" , Borislav Petkov , Ingo Molnar , Mel Gorman , Kay Sievers Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org e.g. should be written as e.g. or e.g., There's no need to add another colon ":" after the one that it's already there. See, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/E.g.#e.g. Please fix that. Thanks, Diego On Mon, May 5, 2014 at 9:57 PM, Rusty Russell wrote: > Randy Dunlap writes: >> All looks good to me except for 2 instances of "eg" which should be >> "e.g." (just above and about 4 paragraphs below here). > > Thanks, fixed: > > diff --git a/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt b/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt > index 56a4c2d0c741..a42b9dd6b46b 100644 > --- a/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt > +++ b/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt > @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ environment, others are passed as command line arguments to init. > Everything after "--" is passed as an argument to init. > > Module parameters can be specified in two ways: via the kernel command > -line with a module name prefix, or via modprobe, eg: > +line with a module name prefix, or via modprobe, e.g.: > > (kernel command line) usbcore.blinkenlights=1 > (modprobe command line) modprobe usbcore blinkenlights=1 > @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Hyphens (dashes) and underscores are equivalent in parameter names, so > can also be entered as > log-buf-len=1M print_fatal_signals=1 > > -Double-quotes can be used to protect spaces in values, eg: > +Double-quotes can be used to protect spaces in values, e.g.: > param="spaces in here" > > This document may not be entirely up to date and comprehensive. The command > -- > To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-kernel" in > the body of a message to majordomo@vger.kernel.org > More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html > Please read the FAQ at http://www.tux.org/lkml/