From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8D6CBC28D13 for ; Tue, 23 Aug 2022 03:07:18 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S239841AbiHWDHQ (ORCPT ); Mon, 22 Aug 2022 23:07:16 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:54450 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S239346AbiHWDGe (ORCPT ); Mon, 22 Aug 2022 23:06:34 -0400 Received: from mail-pg1-x531.google.com (mail-pg1-x531.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:4864:20::531]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id D00C05C9EA; Mon, 22 Aug 2022 20:04:44 -0700 (PDT) Received: by mail-pg1-x531.google.com with SMTP id f4so9278082pgc.12; Mon, 22 Aug 2022 20:04:44 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20210112; h=content-transfer-encoding:in-reply-to:from:references:to :content-language:subject:user-agent:mime-version:date:message-id :from:to:cc; bh=gmsME/xNmhSqLRUEPqjRkzGKXVlvKjoR1g7dAdDOn3M=; b=GJ67RVWTapjI4MKqXYttKtfweWLjlS9bN5zMO5ihhuThwiUuvEhnxd95v6XoiWgzD/ nxQHA1XA/0yq9ik3Tg9jkWq6/Oh2MjzFaHVMzGeUqjgZJrkMn5x1z5xHX+6aPePM55oz y9ezcVhO6aqWftuCmAIqlJxmw7FA6RVx/iLVauaK8MM87fR28GwtJe/CdHIHhhXaIXIG 8AkV5XPyuJUMyIMS0opfSuBdTRt72SAWPOZ8nbcv/f+fTATu7vBkozOaerX7MP+bwRYA TCJ7LNS0SRPosAj+U6UGd6LHe0xaYOPWlalrZmIorPji09gwL9rrRh5K1iPprRfpOTmD u7jA== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20210112; h=content-transfer-encoding:in-reply-to:from:references:to :content-language:subject:user-agent:mime-version:date:message-id :x-gm-message-state:from:to:cc; bh=gmsME/xNmhSqLRUEPqjRkzGKXVlvKjoR1g7dAdDOn3M=; b=B59pzk6RCM7fsvxKR++rxHOOQ2WowlUVa/gBI1PThgBrBrfgUnH883IRPUvbV5oIei qCmvncNZGtF9Re/HqvzNLX94A/BTson+RP5geT18MVRiRRQk0f0BOIDBidmNsykfZ6je dDR9o0HbFI1+uGV4z9gmWpgxwrefYzMoxokcD5NWNYD7buGZvHRK6aGezgbRDnz3X3gt jl6Mm1mE9AmUyUT9vNfEDwCIhGiCdiXhxhzKzJG6tYztJ6xN58zu17GAZqCI77P/12mk HOT1ZQlaBfwmg03LjkNrCPeQHq391uxwmxyIzcKhgIfV/sDqNn/2b7z+RphRV9ohBj+Y R2vg== X-Gm-Message-State: ACgBeo0019moLkGcMSoxxLWjOUK4PUZll3uMcz3fpPNdd4r8/LB9GmRm J9YqQs0NyE68WTPv5CZVgBQp7HNXog0= X-Google-Smtp-Source: AA6agR6GEJq6gQoy8fravQvklgl5/4GBrpi8DbRN3zbyEw9B5n2/hM3Tkxa5lPRr1lMd3UK4EdyPxQ== X-Received: by 2002:a63:2bcc:0:b0:40c:95b5:46a4 with SMTP id r195-20020a632bcc000000b0040c95b546a4mr19027549pgr.535.1661223883957; Mon, 22 Aug 2022 20:04:43 -0700 (PDT) Received: from [192.168.43.80] (subs03-180-214-233-72.three.co.id. [180.214.233.72]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id g29-20020aa796bd000000b00535e46171c1sm8714745pfk.117.2022.08.22.20.04.41 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Mon, 22 Aug 2022 20:04:43 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: Date: Tue, 23 Aug 2022 10:04:40 +0700 MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:91.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/91.12.0 Subject: Re: [PATCH v4] docs: admin-guide/mm: Improve grammar on MM concepts documentation Content-Language: en-US To: alexlzhu@fb.com, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Kernel-team@fb.com References: <20220823021941.4021897-1-alexlzhu@fb.com> From: Bagas Sanjaya In-Reply-To: <20220823021941.4021897-1-alexlzhu@fb.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org On 8/23/22 09:19, alexlzhu@fb.com wrote: > From: Alexander Zhu > > Improve grammar on MM concepts documentation. > > Signed-off-by: Alexander Zhu > --- > Changelog: > > Changes in v4: > -Adjust changelog to be below the dashes > > Changes in v3: > -Correct punctuation based on previous comment > > Changes in v2: > -Correct the subject > -Adjust the description > Nicely done. LGTM. Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya -- An old man doll... just what I always wanted! - Clara