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Mon, 26 Oct 2026 13:41:34 +0100 (CET) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=mailbox.org; s=mail20150812; t=1793018494; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=rSbZwM6ArFWnjmuYAFuqV0i8s7gBfvuVh2SoTZC+x8A=; b=fiQPD5+FuSpQJSMpZyF6nTiKVYDjeyTmcs7Cu5S+MsGVtGAI/MMb1z7ywb8u720v78tsav zb04/v/nC25BBabOPHqTyjvDYtHWyp5U/xpbb3CJq6Zn6csh/9GNbyhnk6FC+For3REk/g GHu5Ses02GQywNtmwY/u+AFbZG1xM6uEQbLTRfXVuqmTF/Oi4MXBDlbkN1HbtIeoXfg8e7 362pw7UP/rggRrs2Bfw1Xm97vOrqi/WUtsfcPEwBB3Ck6lZaRgmJkKP2QXS3EsjC+XAqKh KsQFGWn+mdZu/oSVUrXQI5tZzZdaCrvgwclzxpAEwgB0kXXhPBITAd/MtzeJGg== Message-ID: Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/start: fix grammar From: Manuel Ebner To: Aveline Noir , SJ Park Cc: Jonathan Corbet , Shuah Khan , Randy Dunlap , damon@lists.linux.dev, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Date: Mon, 26 Oct 2026 13:41:32 +0100 In-Reply-To: <179301327249.2.1796164575094900927.damon-docs-grammar-1@gmail.com> References: <179301327249.2.4690198998605536207.damon-docs-grammar-0@gmail.com> <179301327249.2.1796164575094900927.damon-docs-grammar-1@gmail.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable User-Agent: Evolution 3.60.2 (3.60.2-1.fc44) X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: List-Owner: Precedence: list MIME-Version: 1.0 X-MBO-RS-META: oduzt75dmocrdjqeru19648ieiwqcoim X-MBO-RS-ID: bcd2318e5fcca3399dd On Mon, 2026-10-26 at 22:14 +1100, Aveline Noir wrote: > Fix a few grammar slips in the getting-started guide, like "make DAMON > monitors" and a region "that has not accessed". >=20 > "The line of the commands" used to be "The first two lines".=C2=A0 With o= nly > one masim line left, I make it "The first line".=20 >=20 > Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir > --- > =C2=A0Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/start.rst | 10 +++++----- > =C2=A01 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) >=20 > diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/start.rst b/Documentation= /admin-guide/mm/damon/start.rst > index d98b0eb8e771..a83fcc2265bd 100644 > --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/start.rst > +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/start.rst > @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ the execution. :: > =C2=A0 > =C2=A0The first command of the above example downloads and builds an arti= ficial > =C2=A0memory access generator program called ``masim``.=C2=A0 The second = command asks DAMO > -to start the program via the given command and make DAMON monitors the n= ewly > +to start the program via the given command and make DAMON monitor the ne= wly 'The second command asks ... and makes ...' Thus: +to start the program via the given command and makes DAMON monitor the new= ly > =C2=A0started process.=C2=A0 The third command retrieves the current snap= shot of the > =C2=A0monitored access pattern of the process from DAMON and shows the pa= ttern in a > =C2=A0human readable format. > @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ human readable format. > =C2=A0The first line of the output shows the relative access temperature = (hotness) of > =C2=A0the regions in a single row heatmap format.=C2=A0 Each column on th= e heatmap > =C2=A0represents regions of same size on the monitored virtual address sp= ace.=C2=A0 The > -position of the column on the row and the number on the column represent= s the > +position of the column on the row and the number on the column represent= the > =C2=A0relative location and access temperature of the region.=C2=A0 ``[..= .]`` means > =C2=A0unmapped huge regions on the virtual address spaces.=C2=A0 The seco= nd line shows > =C2=A0additional information for better understanding the heatmap. I have read the damon directory aswell but I didn't find enought to send a = patch yet. But I found this, could you add it to your patch? @@ -78,8 +78,8 @@ additional information for better understanding the heatm= ap. =20 Each line of the output from the third line shows which virtual address ra= nge (``addr XX size XX``) of the process is how frequently (``access XX %``) -accessed for how long time (``age XX``). For example, the eleventh region= of -~9.5 MiB size is being most frequently accessed for last 3.7 seconds. Fin= ally, +accessed for how long (``age XX``). For example, the eleventh region of +~9.5 MiB size is being most frequently accessed for the last 3.7 seconds. = Finally, the fourth command stops DAMON. Rest looks good to me: Reviewed-by: Manuel Ebner Thanks > ...