From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1731DC6FD20 for ; Fri, 24 Mar 2023 16:51:04 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S231795AbjCXQvD (ORCPT ); Fri, 24 Mar 2023 12:51:03 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:37146 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S229734AbjCXQvB (ORCPT ); Fri, 24 Mar 2023 12:51:01 -0400 Received: from mail-il1-x12f.google.com (mail-il1-x12f.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:4864:20::12f]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 530C1136EA for ; Fri, 24 Mar 2023 09:51:00 -0700 (PDT) Received: by mail-il1-x12f.google.com with SMTP id l9so1183826iln.1 for ; Fri, 24 Mar 2023 09:51:00 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=linuxfoundation.org; s=google; t=1679676659; x=1682268659; h=content-transfer-encoding:in-reply-to:from:references:cc:to :content-language:subject:user-agent:mime-version:date:message-id :from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:reply-to; bh=R6W/+xSIy2LrHW9iOt6nruh+Qj6F+h5sXjXOMzQkKqc=; b=TkwDD8j3zxa46H6s0Y2Cd+cqCjtL8QZFEo4pvrG3FhSyny7CcZlhoKAIPQdbaOhGxw eQ1KcRtb/SlQnuljuraLGX38yLSYr67CiNWalVaUK7IPAyd3tUYuUM/JVdvdFrRFLGvr pnofxGZMEjNxR5cU0YGOKaWS+LC59OL3ka7Ok= X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20210112; t=1679676659; x=1682268659; h=content-transfer-encoding:in-reply-to:from:references:cc:to :content-language:subject:user-agent:mime-version:date:message-id :x-gm-message-state:from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:reply-to; bh=R6W/+xSIy2LrHW9iOt6nruh+Qj6F+h5sXjXOMzQkKqc=; b=SuArW2h7yppaa/BNlzauzbdHeTsIFs0ihHUS7uSuOspRSTR58BU9r1WhAJ6ayjhvN2 AiQbol3bB5oXmAu16RIfuR3K5+CAnxTDEDD1lBti1eBpjmSLDcw0+ZKsc7x08rSY3yo/ 9DaQvAsMiiOttJmCR1EDJwyA6PESQUImodVnZ6a3BS282fXiBANPrKXryYcXoi9BKmMI dm2bXHgykR8sMnpRQKXa3Gaz+dFtYqIJxaVPm+ZZDYPilrDs3mUlhhL13kDy4jdsuXLv /fTjJYvx2+0bQJ38JOaUG+FB8O4eUQR2FFvyOtDN4Z30MAdU4AVFrZ9JQQqqDJrPqEG3 zQMw== X-Gm-Message-State: AAQBX9fFJTbjUMmj2bH2zNv6luesq08sJ5KOIHJyn/5cQU9/1pRbA+qp FRZZIRbtz/gaBNlehjA2/bnG9w== X-Google-Smtp-Source: AKy350bWEnOhZA+41gMK0JwGaYDc47+uvmcqhyuuFaYWlslXE1inLEwmiIOYesAeOcifs1QRRAy0nw== X-Received: by 2002:a05:6e02:12a8:b0:316:67be:1b99 with SMTP id f8-20020a056e0212a800b0031667be1b99mr1211674ilr.0.1679676659602; Fri, 24 Mar 2023 09:50:59 -0700 (PDT) Received: from [192.168.1.128] ([38.15.45.1]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id g4-20020a05663810e400b003c2b67fac92sm6908450jae.81.2023.03.24.09.50.59 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Fri, 24 Mar 2023 09:50:59 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: Date: Fri, 24 Mar 2023 10:50:58 -0600 MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:102.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/102.8.0 Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] docs: add system-state document to admin-guide Content-Language: en-US To: Jonathan Corbet Cc: kstewart@linuxfoundation.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Shuah Khan References: <20230322152049.12723-1-skhan@linuxfoundation.org> <877cv7cpyj.fsf@meer.lwn.net> From: Shuah Khan In-Reply-To: <877cv7cpyj.fsf@meer.lwn.net> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org On 3/23/23 11:55, Jonathan Corbet wrote: > Shuah Khan writes: > >> Add a new system state document to the admin-guide. This document is >> intended to be used as a guide on how to gather higher level information >> about a system and its run-time activity. >> >> Signed-off-by: Shuah Khan >> --- >> Changes since v1: >> -- Addressed review comments >> Thank you for the review and agree with all your comments. I will send v3 shortly. thanks, -- Shuah