From: Armin Wolf <W_Armin@gmx.de>
To: Anaswara T Rajan <anaswaratrajan@gmail.com>
Cc: corbet@lwn.net, platform-driver-x86@vger.kernel.org,
linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH] fix typo in Documentation/wmi/devices/dell-wmi-ddv.rst
Date: Fri, 4 Oct 2024 01:03:29 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <17bc2698-9113-4cf0-b58b-4f9db1813753@gmx.de> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20241002100748.309707-1-anaswaratrajan@gmail.com>
Am 02.10.24 um 12:07 schrieb Anaswara T Rajan:
> typo in word 'diagnostics'
Please rename your patch to "platform/x86: dell-ddv: Fix typo in documentation" and
rework the patch description so it forms a full sentence.
Other than that, the patch look fine.
Thanks,
Armin Wolf
> Signed-off-by: Anaswara T Rajan <anaswaratrajan@gmail.com>
> ---
> Documentation/wmi/devices/dell-wmi-ddv.rst | 4 ++--
> 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/wmi/devices/dell-wmi-ddv.rst b/Documentation/wmi/devices/dell-wmi-ddv.rst
> index 2fcdfcf03327..e0c20af30948 100644
> --- a/Documentation/wmi/devices/dell-wmi-ddv.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/wmi/devices/dell-wmi-ddv.rst
> @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Introduction
> ============
>
> Many Dell notebooks made after ~2020 support a WMI-based interface for
> -retrieving various system data like battery temperature, ePPID, diagostic data
> +retrieving various system data like battery temperature, ePPID, diagnostic data
> and fan/thermal sensor data.
>
> This interface is likely used by the `Dell Data Vault` software on Windows,
> @@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ Reverse-Engineering the DDV WMI interface
> 4. Try to deduce the meaning of a certain WMI method by comparing the control
> flow with other ACPI methods (_BIX or _BIF for battery related methods
> for example).
> -5. Use the built-in UEFI diagostics to view sensor types/values for fan/thermal
> +5. Use the built-in UEFI diagnostics to view sensor types/values for fan/thermal
> related methods (sometimes overwriting static ACPI data fields can be used
> to test different sensor type values, since on some machines this data is
> not reinitialized upon a warm reset).
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