From: Philipp Matthias Hahn <pmhahn@titan.lahn.de>
To: Rob Landley <rob@landley.net>
Cc: Kernel Mailing List <linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] Documentation for ramfs, rootfs, initramfs.
Date: Tue, 18 Oct 2005 09:46:01 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20051018074601.GA2404@titan.lahn.de> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <200510172242.08809.rob@landley.net>
Hello!
Non a native speaker myself, but if I remember correctly, I found the
following issues in your nice documentation, which you might want to fix:
On Mon, Oct 17, 2005 at 10:42:08PM -0500, Rob Landley wrote:
> --- old/Documentation/filesystems/ramfs-rootfs-initramfs.txt 2005-10-17 22:39:30.194448784 -0500
> +What is ramfs?
> +--------------
s/cacheing/caching/
s/soon soon/soon/
s/was of a fixed size/was of fixed size/
s/was a fixed size/was of fixed size/
> +What is initramfs?
> +------------------
s/bringing the system the rest of the way up/bringing the system up the rest of the way/
s/after the embedded cpio archive is extracted into it//
s/a root partition, then exec/a root partition and execute/
> +All this differs from the old initrd in several ways:
s/but by default it's an empty archive./but by default is an empty archive./
s/When switching another root device/When switching to another root device/
BYtE
Philipp
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