Re: [PATCH] Documentation: remove duplicate cleanups

[Paolo Ornati <ornati@gmail.com>]

On Thu, 29 Jun 2006 14:02:18 +0200
jensmh@gmx.de wrote:

> > diff --git a/Documentation/block/as-iosched.txt b/Documentation/block/as-iosched.txt
> > index 6f47332..ed24cdd 100644
> > --- a/Documentation/block/as-iosched.txt
> > +++ b/Documentation/block/as-iosched.txt
> > @@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ or if the next request in the queue is "
> >  just completed request, it is dispatched immediately.  Otherwise,
> >  statistics (average think time, average seek distance) on the process
> >  that submitted the just completed request are examined.  If it seems
> > -likely that that process will submit another request soon, and that
> 
> old version is correct, I think.

me too (I've exagerated a bit in killing duplicates ;)

> 
> > +likely that process will submit another request soon, and that
> >  request is likely to be near the just completed request, then the IO
> >  scheduler will stop dispatching more read requests for up time (antic_expire)
> >  milliseconds, hoping that process will submit a new request near the one
> 
> 
> > diff --git a/Documentation/exception.txt b/Documentation/exception.txt
> > index 3cb39ad..75aaa6e 100644
> > --- a/Documentation/exception.txt
> > +++ b/Documentation/exception.txt
> > @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ int verify_area(int type, const void * a
> >  function (which has since been replaced by access_ok()).
> >  
> >  This function verified that the memory area starting at address 
> > -addr and of size size was accessible for the operation specified 
> 
> maybe old version is correct.

yes

> 
> > +addr and of size was accessible for the operation specified
> >  in type (read or write). To do this, verify_read had to look up the 
> >  virtual memory area (vma) that contained the address addr. In the 
> >  normal case (correctly working program), this test was successful. 
> > diff --git a/Documentation/fb/fbcon.txt b/Documentation/fb/fbcon.txt
> > index f373df1..4a9739a 100644
> > --- a/Documentation/fb/fbcon.txt
> > +++ b/Documentation/fb/fbcon.txt
> > @@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ C. Boot options
> >  
> >  C. Attaching, Detaching and Unloading
> >  
> > -Before going on on how to attach, detach and unload the framebuffer console, an
> 
> not sure here, I'm not a native english speaker.

yes, the old one looks correct

> 
> > +Before going on how to attach, detach and unload the framebuffer console, an
> >  illustration of the dependencies may help.
> >  

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