From: Grant Grundler <grundler@parisc-linux.org>
To: "Zhang, Yanmin" <yanmin_zhang@linux.intel.com>
Cc: LKML <linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org>,
linux-pci maillist <linux-pci@atrey.karlin.mff.cuni.cz>,
Tom Long Nguyen <tom.l.nguyen@intel.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/6] PCI-Express AER implemetation
Date: Thu, 29 Jun 2006 10:22:14 -0600 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20060629162214.GB18767@colo.lackof.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <1151543547.28493.70.camel@ymzhang-perf.sh.intel.com>
Yanmin,
Just one nit...
On Thu, Jun 29, 2006 at 09:12:27AM +0800, Zhang, Yanmin wrote:
> Patch 1 consists of the pciaer-howto.txt document.
...
> +In existing Linux kernels, 2.4.x and 2.6.x, there is no root service
> +driver available to manage the PCI Express advanced error reporting
> +extended capability structure.
"existing Linux kernels" won't mean anything 3 years.
You might be more specific such as "All kernels before 2.6.18 released..."
...
> +To provide a solution to these BIOS issues requires the PCI Express AER
> +Root driver that provides:
> +
> +- A mechanism for the OS and application to determine if a fatal
> + error is fatal to the system, OS, or application increasing
> + uptime.
The word "mechanism" is used frequently.
I wonder if sometimes (like above) "infrastructure" is meant.
> +8. Frequent Asked Questions
I'd be tempted to make the FAQ the next section after the introduction.
hth,
grant
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2006-06-29 16:22 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 14+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2006-06-29 1:12 Zhang, Yanmin
2006-06-29 1:18 ` [PATCH 2/6] " Zhang, Yanmin
2006-06-29 1:22 ` [PATCH 3/6] " Zhang, Yanmin
2006-06-29 1:30 ` [PATCH 4/6] " Zhang, Yanmin
2006-06-29 1:33 ` [PATCH 5/6] " Zhang, Yanmin
2006-06-29 1:41 ` [PATCH 6/6] " Zhang, Yanmin
2006-06-29 16:22 ` Grant Grundler [this message]
2006-06-30 1:28 ` [PATCH 1/6] " Zhang, Yanmin
2006-06-30 7:52 ` Zhang, Yanmin
2006-07-12 1:36 Zhang, Yanmin
2006-07-12 4:18 ` Greg KH
2006-07-12 5:07 ` Zhang, Yanmin
2006-07-12 4:20 ` Greg KH
2006-07-12 5:08 ` Zhang, Yanmin
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