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From: SJ Park <sj@kernel.org>
To: Aveline Noir <jm5905938@gmail.com>
Cc: SJ Park <sj@kernel.org>, Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>,
	Shuah Khan <skhan@linuxfoundation.org>,
	Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>,
	Manuel Ebner <manuelebnerli@mailbox.org>,
	damon@lists.linux.dev, linux-mm@kvack.org,
	linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 8/8] Docs/mm/damon/monitoring_intervals_tuning_example: fix grammar and typos
Date: Mon, 26 Oct 2026 07:59:23 -0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20261026145924.151190-1-sj@kernel.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <179301327249.2.2968995103662294177.damon-docs-grammar-8@gmail.com>

On Mon, 26 Oct 2026 22:14:40 +1100 Aveline Noir <jm5905938@gmail.com> wrote:

> Fix a few typos, including "Moniting" in the title, and some grammar in
> the interval tuning example.
> 
> "starts looking degrading" should be "start looking degraded for", as I
> think the sentence means the cold region detection starts to look worse.
> Rewrap where the lines got too long.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir <jm5905938@gmail.com>

Reviewed-by: SJ Park <sj@kernel.org>


Thanks,
SJ

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  reply	other threads:[~2026-10-26 14:59 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 27+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2026-10-26 11:14 [PATCH 0/8] Docs: damon: " Aveline Noir
2026-10-26 11:14 ` [PATCH 1/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/start: fix grammar Aveline Noir
2026-10-26 12:41   ` Manuel Ebner
2026-10-26 14:29     ` SJ Park
2026-10-26 15:50       ` Aveline Noir
2026-10-26 14:10   ` SJ Park
2026-10-26 11:14 ` [PATCH 2/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat: fix pronoun agreement Aveline Noir
2026-10-26 12:44   ` Manuel Ebner
2026-10-26 14:31     ` SJ Park
2026-10-26 15:50       ` Aveline Noir
2026-10-26 14:24   ` SJ Park
2026-10-26 11:14 ` [PATCH 3/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/usage: fix grammar Aveline Noir
2026-10-26 14:37   ` SJ Park
2026-10-26 11:14 ` [PATCH 4/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/lru_sort: fix remaining grammar Aveline Noir
2026-10-26 12:57   ` Manuel Ebner
2026-10-26 14:44     ` SJ Park
2026-10-26 15:50       ` Aveline Noir
2026-10-26 14:42   ` SJ Park
2026-10-26 11:14 ` [PATCH 5/8] Docs/mm/damon/design: fix grammar and typos Aveline Noir
2026-10-26 14:54   ` SJ Park
2026-10-26 11:14 ` [PATCH 6/8] Docs/mm/damon/api: fix verb form Aveline Noir
2026-10-26 14:55   ` SJ Park
2026-10-26 11:14 ` [PATCH 7/8] Docs/mm/damon/maintainer-profile: fix subject-verb agreement Aveline Noir
2026-10-26 14:56   ` SJ Park
2026-10-26 11:14 ` [PATCH 8/8] Docs/mm/damon/monitoring_intervals_tuning_example: fix grammar and typos Aveline Noir
2026-10-26 14:59   ` SJ Park [this message]
2026-10-27  0:49 ` [PATCH 0/8] Docs: damon: " SJ Park

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