Re: [PATCH 2/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat: fix pronoun agreement

[Manuel Ebner <manuelebnerli@mailbox.org>]

Hi Aveline,

On Mon, 2026-10-26 at 22:14 +1100, Aveline Noir wrote:
> "converts it" refers to the access events, so I think it should be
> "them".  Rewrap the paragraph while at it.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir <jm5905938@gmail.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst | 8 ++++----
>  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst
> index 4a9db755a526..a93609649a5f 100644
> --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst

Here I found this one:
@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ enabled
 
 Enable or disable DAMON_STAT.
 
-You can enable DAMON_STAT by setting the value of this parameter as ``Y``.
-Setting it as ``N`` disables DAMON_STAT.  The default value is set by
+You can enable DAMON_STAT by setting the value of this parameter to ``Y``.
+Setting it to ``N`` disables DAMON_STAT.  The default value is set by
 ``CONFIG_DAMON_STAT_ENABLED_DEFAULT`` build config option.
 
> @@ -68,10 +68,10 @@ estimated_memory_bandwidth
>  Estimated memory bandwidth consumption (bytes per second) of the system.
>  
>  DAMON_STAT reads observed access events on the current DAMON results snapshot
> -and converts it to memory bandwidth consumption estimation in bytes per second.
> -The resulting metric is exposed to user via this read-only parameter.  Because
> -DAMON uses sampling, this is only an estimation of the access intensity rather
> -than accurate memory bandwidth.
> +and converts them to memory bandwidth consumption estimation in bytes per
> +second.  The resulting metric is exposed to user via this read-only parameter.
> +Because DAMON uses sampling, this is only an estimation of the access intensity
> +rather than accurate memory bandwidth.
>  
>  memory_idle_ms_percentiles
>  --------------------------


Thanks,
Reviewed-by: Manuel Ebner <manuelebnerli@mailbox.org>